So I started a new series. It's my first ever story I'm putting out there. It's called Eterna. So far I have 2 chapters up, just over 3 thousand words written. Can some please read and review it for me? I'm not getting any feedback from anywhere, and I would really like to know if I'm doing well, what I could do better and any helpful tips. Specifically, I want to know if the pacing is alright, if the story seems interesting, if anyone would continue reading.
Here is a link to the series.
Here is a link to the series.