Hey there! It's been a while since I did something like this. I thought to myself that now is the time to show off my writing ability and determine whether it needs some improvements. My story is called Bike Hero, and it should be written in the past tense as last time I remembered writing it in both tenses which I made a huge mistake. But that was when I was writing a different story, which proved to be unsuccessful, and I couldn't get myself motivated to continue writing it because of it. So your critique and suggestions are much appreciated!
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/335238-bike-hero/chapter/335239/
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/335238-bike-hero/chapter/335239/