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[whitesculptor]

Do post a link, and also if you want the review to include the rating/stars. (Regarding stars, I'll only 5 star if it truly deserves it, if below, I'll leave a number in the last line that I believe to be fair, to avoid lowering your scores. As a fellow author, I know how it may impact the hearts of some of you.)
Mainly inclined to those which don't yet have one.
Do feel free to check other reviews I did for fellow authors, you may hopefully learn a thing or two.

15/06/2022 - 20 novels annihilated.

 

[Lorelliad]

RE: All From His Seat

They say Krodoa is very much alive. 'That' planet of magic, home to countless races and supernatural phenomenon. This very world is set to undergo an enormous change as Michael, a human from Earth, is reincarnated into the body of a baby.

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Rating and stars as well, if you don't mind

 

[Mr.Grey-Cat]

Just a review will do, thanks.

Lost Solace Online

As a person faithful to her hobbies, Alice made the usual decision to play and indulge herself with a new and interesting game, but... Hmmm, somehow it feels like something is really wrong here though? Huh, she is just tired? but that eerie crimson moon i-... What? it's normal? Oh,...

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[K5Rakitan]

I'm always happy to have more one-star ratings! The link is in my signature.

 

[Nirokuro]

Black cat witch (kuroneko mahootsukai)

Kawashima Chisuke was a normal high school student, until suddenly his whole class was covered in white light and sent to another world with swords and magic. Using their new given power called the vocation to find their way in this world. This is the adventure of the witch student...

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Just a review will be good but if you have time you can also look my other novel

 

[K_Jira]

The Supreme Hero's Younger Brother

If you don't mind BL, rating/star as well, please

 

[Deleted member 42060]

That Time I Didn’t Get Reincarnated

freak me

 

[MatildasBT]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/487974/wondering-through-the-stars/

I am waiting for my cover to be approved. I am rewriting my chapters, so if you find a difference in writing, that's where I am right now. Please leave a review!

 

[Roktobiz]

A fanfic, my first attempt to write, but still a review and rating would be great

Rise of the Phantom

Fang Hao, a novice Rogue, accepted a delivery job from an eccentric wizard. The job would take him into the fey-haunted Cloakwood on a seemingly simple mission . But what he witnessed in the forest started a chain of events that led him through the hell itself. Join Fang Hao in...

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[verseii]

Worldview

25 year old Aksel Liebert is thrown into a new world where Earth is dominated by a new system demanding each being take part in the 'scenarios'. Inspired by Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint.

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[georgelee5786]

Review and stars, please. The link is in my signature.

 

[Bartun]

The last time someone reviewed my story they massacred it

It would be nice to have another point of view, I'll leave the link below.

Nowhere to Run

Nina is a young priestess that just started her journey in the Highlands, in a faraway land. But everything falls apart when greater forces are scheming and unknown men are suddenly after her. She will have no choice but to resort to her wits, trust unexpected allies, and navigate her...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[K_Jira]

Do post a link, and also if you want the review to include the rating/stars.
Mainly inclined to those which don't have one.

Thanks for the review! I've always got feedback on my grammar, but they didn't specify which part to be fixed. Really appreciate it!

 

[ZeroX0666]

Do post a link, and also if you want the review to include the rating/stars.
Mainly inclined to those which don't have one.

Sure i would be interested.

 

[whitesculptor]

Thanks for the review! I've always got feedback on my grammar, but they didn't specify which part to be fixed. Really appreciate it!

Glad to be of help! Figured I'd extend it a tad more, seeing as most people complain but don't really advise better. The most famous ones being the "show don't tell" but lack either the skill or the will to contribute further in the matter.

The last time someone reviewed my story they massacred it

It would be nice to have another point of view, I'll leave the link below.

Nowhere to Run

Nina is a young priestess that just started her journey in the Highlands, in a faraway land. But everything falls apart when greater forces are scheming and unknown men are suddenly after her. She will have no choice but to resort to her wits, trust unexpected allies, and navigate her...

www.scribblehub.com

I see no review there though? Was it via comment?

 

[Bartun]

Glad to be of help! Figured I'd extend it a tad more, seeing as most people complain but don't really advise better. The most famous ones being the "show don't tell" but lack either the skill or the will to contribute further in the matter.

I see no review there though? Was it via comment?

No, it was in a forum thread, luckily.

Glad to be of help! Figured I'd extend it a tad more, seeing as most people complain but don't really advise better. The most famous ones being the "show don't tell" but lack either the skill or the will to contribute further in the matter.

I see no review there though? Was it via comment?

I just took a look at your review. It will be a lot of help for my next edit! Thank you so much!

 

[BenJepheneT]

Do post a link, and also if you want the review to include the rating/stars.
Mainly inclined to those which don't have one.

I was gonna link some hardcore smut but nah, I'll let you off easy with this one first.

Kapal

Something tore the old world apart. Nobody knows what, when, why, or how. All that's left are dried remnants of the past and the birth of a new, savage, cruel world. Subjek woke up right at the cusp of a turning age for this desolate landscape; two roaring factions vying...

www.scribblehub.com

It's got two ratings on it already but I hope that won't affect your decision. I'll also take the stars, thank you very much.

 

[whitesculptor]

No, it was in a forum thread, luckily.

I just took a look at your review. It will be a lot of help for my next edit! Thank you so much!

No, it was in a forum thread, luckily.

I just took a look at your review. It will be a lot of help for my next edit! Thank you so much!

Glad to be of help!

I was gonna link some hardcore smut but nah, I'll let you off easy with this one first.

Kapal

Something tore the old world apart. Nobody knows what, when, why, or how. All that's left are dried remnants of the past and the birth of a new, savage, cruel world. Subjek woke up right at the cusp of a turning age for this desolate landscape; two roaring factions vying...

www.scribblehub.com

It's got two ratings on it already but I hope that won't affect your decision. I'll also take the stars, thank you very much.

I've written worse, I'm sure. Though, I'll tackle that one!

 

[MatildasBT]

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which one is better???

 

[whitesculptor]

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which one is better???

After, hopefully it should be visible enough now