I think this is going to work better than the modifications you have done (might be since i did it myselfe).
By using colors that are brighter and more diffrent than elswhere i think that it's easier to actualy see the the texst while the dungeon can stil keep it's retro look.
The reason for the color on teh by: bla blabla is that it goes more into the background but is stil easily separated from it.
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Thanks for giving me a reason for playing a bit around with photoshop once more
@Akhier.
So what do you think?
BTW great work on making the cover, could probably have used 4-5 hours and stil not be anywhere close to what you managed to make. Only reason i even tried to do something here was because i have studyed a bit about what to do to make things catch your atention visualy.
EDIT: And sorry for forgeting to make that area on the g black, the letter looks soooo, so terrible now and teh picture is a BIT to large.
EDIT 2: you don't have to move the title above the dungeon, but rising it a bit might be a good idea.