Ive started to write this book because of the love i have for kingdom building & op mc
It's my first book and english is my second language so there might be lot of mistakes but i will try best best to improve my writing and also if you can read and review my book it will be a huge help to me and i will be eternally thankful to you.
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Hi, I read the first chapter, but I think you should edit it again for a better readability, here let me help you
In the realm of darkness, thunder and lighting went havoc, cutting through the sky as a figure emerged out of portal/thin air/ or whatever you want it from.
On one side, people with hair that shone even in the dark was startled at this figure arrival, the person who stood in the foremost line approached the figure, his aura radiated powerful energy akin to a sun, his muscle as if ripped through his golden robe.
" Supreme God Evan, what are you doing here? Was it because the White God Squad failed to capture the Supreme Demon Queen."
Evan stood there for a moment, his face was solemn yet one could notice a hint of urgency within his eyes.
"The Supreme Demon Queen's strength beyond our expectation."
The person squinted his eyes, revealing slightly difficult expression but eventually smiled.
"Don't worry Supreme God Evan, we, the divine Gods can slay that harlot and her minnions, we assured you the security of Mortal realms."
"Kaya, you don't get it, I am here because her strength is now comparable to mine."
The War God Kaya dropped his jaw, looking at Evan with disbelieve.
"How's that even possible?! You are our supreme, there is never been someone as strong as you, let alone that harlot..."
Evan sighed, he looked toward certain direction as if anticipated someone to appear.
"Light exist, so there also Darkness. One complement one after another. The key here is Balance, God Kaya, when the Light is strong, the Darkness will follow."
Kaya looked troubled, he never been the one who liked to think that deep, all he knew that was Demons should be exterminated completely, their presence would cause danger toward the Mortal's fate.
At this moment, a Dark aura appeared at the distant, a shadowy figure with blood red eyes.
"Evan, long time no see..."
End??