Recent content by A2Remedy

I'M SORRY! YOU HAVE ME HOOK, LINE, AND SINKER! Most definitely ambitious with a minor error here and there but GAH DAYUM!

Will do! Thanks for the advice!

I'd love to hear what you think https://www.scribblehub.com/read/465031-tales-amongst-the-wind-naruto-au/chapter/465076/

It's a little something I've been having a little trouble with. I got 5 Mcs right now though 4 are more active currently, I'm not sure of how to make it sound like separate people. More in terms of sharing their thoughts so would you have any advice on how to keep them sounding or viewing things...

Well for why, It's more like practice. I did have plans in the future for stories with an rpg element so I'm taking the time now to find the way I like presenting if /when it does come up. Since I'm not sure to what degree yet, It's the perfect chance to flesh it out. As more of one but in this...

Well, I'm sort of doing that but not really. My characters are under the influence of a sentient interactive system but what I did to separate its influence is that they can play the game where the stats are fully working in their avatars/vessels like a regulars game while only a very small...

Firstly, I love the battle scene. You did extremely well on emphasizing the traits most prominent and taking how that influences their fighting style into consideration. Like Kiara's concern over controlling the fire thus taking the fight to the sky. The only thing I'd really consider is...

Sorry to ask, but how do I screen someone's music?

I've been wanting to do this for a long time but, I just don't really know much about the topic. Are we allowed to include links to music in our stories? I've been wanting to make a litrpg about a bard for a while and have them compete against others via a performance, sort of like a battle of...

MR. PUFFELS NOOO!

A little bittersweet, I hope this is alright though! I only had one of my MCs on my mind and went with it! :blob_no: Staring at the arch pouring light into the room. Barely able to move a muscle. Her head is rested on the knee of the being who watched her get so far, only to come so short from...