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    What are your thoughts on smut stories?

    I had a similar issue when I first started Sweet Venom but it has grown significantly since then. The original version was just complete and utter smut, with story being an after-thought. Since I've rewritten it, its now a story with smut, rather than smut with a story. My biggest issue is I...
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    Casual reader feedback

    Eyyy, glad you enjoyed it! I think the second half of arc one really picks up some pace and puts Diego through his paces but I won't spoil it! Diego does have good reason to be so chill but again, spoilers and whatnot. Its not really revealed in arc one though but you might be able to clue...
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    Writing tip and advice that didn't work.

    Writing smaller chapters. I tried it, I tried breaking up the larger chapters and posting them in bite sizes. Created more problems than it solved.
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    Casual reader feedback

    My friend, you are going to be swarmed. Bless your heart. I'll drop Sweet Venom in, should be easy to warm up to. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/372005/sweet-venom--rebroken/
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    Rejected from Royal Road for a "sexual cover," now posting on Scribble Hub

    Thats a shame! My aliens have far, FAR larger boobs than your girl and I got away with it but its all in the text rather than the cover. I can kinda see what they're talking about, it IS a sexual cover, but it feels overblown to be honest. Feels like luck of the draw more than anything else. RR...
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    BL SMUT REVIEW + (DARK SMUTTY NOVELS) let's review each other~

    Dropped a review for you, got to chapter 5, i'm kinda feedback light on it as I think you're nailing the story you're going for, so well done!
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    BL SMUT REVIEW + (DARK SMUTTY NOVELS) let's review each other~

    Its got a lot of story! Let me know what you think! I just finished chapter 1 of VM now, on to the second shortly!
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    BL SMUT REVIEW + (DARK SMUTTY NOVELS) let's review each other~

    I'm in. Give SV a go, its sex scenes have warnings but i've had good reviews. Should be right up your street! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/372005/sweet-venom--rebroken/ Edit - I apparently jumped at the SMUT label and completely missed the BL label. Haha, woops! SV isn't really BL, the...
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    How do you feel about character-driven stories compared to plot-driven stories?

    Whilst they have different criteria, ultimately the deciding factor here is always the same thing, quality. Plot-driven stories need good plots at a bear minimum. Character centred stories need good characters at a bear minimum.
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    What a wonderful reply to come back to! Glad you enjoyed, even if Seeth was swinging in ways you perhaps didn't expect! Do let me know if you keep reading! I love how arc one pans out, still have some of my favourite moments of the whole series!
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    I'll throw my hat into the hive, why not. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/372005/sweet-venom--rebroken/ Smut scenes are marked and skippable, otherwise its a blend of sci-fi, fantasty, action, thriller and horror. Good reviews mostly, just revamped the beginning too!
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    Unoriginal feedback request thread #575389 - BUT THIS TIME WITH SEX

    Hey folks, i've recently completed another edit of my story series Sweet Venom as i've submitted it to a competition. Me and my wife ran through arc one again and added some details, smoothed the writing and removed some of the cringe, it feels much better and i'm looking for feedback on it once...
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    Is it possible to add a new chapter between already published chapters?

    Wonderful, thank you for your help!
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    Is it possible to add a new chapter between already published chapters?

    Hey folks, quick question hopefully! I've recently done a re-edit of my story series Sweet Venom's first arc and ended up chopping my first chapter in two and adding quite a lot to it to better pace the beginning, is it possible to add a new chapter between already published chapters? Or should...
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    fanfic smut writer's psychology

    Its a universal truth. It even applies to power fantasies that don't have sex. You make a whole universe with factions and power scaling and all that jazz and someone comes along and goes "This is brilliant, here is my self insert faction, they're stronger than all of yours :)"
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