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  • Tsuruya
    Shorter advice : Read more.
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    Tsuruya
    Tsuruya
    Just like game devs creating meh games or full of elephant-sized problems because they arent gamers, its same thing for authors.

    A good author, is someone that like to read. Like a game dev like to play videogames.
    Tsuruya
    Tsuruya
    Also writing is like drawing.
    ElijahRyne
    ElijahRyne
    You might start off bad but persistent effort, and letting yourself fail, will lead you to improve.
    Hans.Trondheim
    Well, in response to your plea for help in that thread, I think your synopsis would be better if you remove the descriptive phrases. Let the reader think what's going on. Hook them by a dash of mystery.
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    Tsuruya
    Tsuruya
    .....No.

    Mystery is not a good idea. Or least change your phrasing.
    Just simply say "bait the reader" but even that is bad without nowadays spoilerstyle.
    Bc people can misunderstand what you meant to "poetic" or "write very vaguely"
    Tsuruya
    Tsuruya
    People underestimate the 2010ish method of japan of write 50m long title and spoiling stuff.
    Its like sayings or memes or even ancestor-advices.

    Because people overjoke of it, people began to have the impression its just a joke and not paying attention to.
    ("Dont sleep after eating or you will turn into a cow" JP is one example, that have science proving its correct its bad but in the end it become a "joke")
    Tsuruya
    Tsuruya
    And well, JP has more history (and chinese WN industry) about how to make it more attractive and/or better.

    To make it short
    between : The man and the wind VS The mage that control SSS-lvl wind magic get his revenge on its backstabbing country

    CLEARLY people will first prefer or simply try 2nd one.
    And gj, the limited number readers wont have time to read first one.
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