Recent content by Chestnutriceeee

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    Minimal Encouragers in dialogue

    I personally find them to make things more immersive. It doesn't make sense when one person goes rambling on to another without any feedback. Having a "Hm" or "Yeah" thrown in between makes it feel more realistic to me.
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    The most dignified gesture to pay respect to higher authority?

    Crawl towards them like this...
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    Two different people in dialogue

    “Say, doesn't this place have quite a few street animals?” “I guess? Speaking of, do you think a stray dog can kill a shark?”
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If you don't mind, would you read mine. I think you have read the first chapter before but I changed it just 2 days ago based on some advice from you and a few other people >.< https://www.scribblehub.com/series/325839/trial-run/
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    Verbal bias?

    Here's what I think.
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    Welcome thread for the newbies!

    Heya~! I am chestnutriceeee, short for chestnutriceandkamehameha! (Yes, I don't know how it is short either :/) I just joined SH to post my story and read some while I am at it! Name/Nickname: Anything related to chestnuts does Hobbies/Interests: Reading Novels and playing Genshin Impact...
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