Recent content by CupcakeNinja

I feel attacked

Agreed. Erotica is infinitely better You talking ass or pastry? Because both are fantastic

I know, i just didnt think hating on vamp waifus was a thing. Anyone who thinks vamps shouldnt be in every story is bitch-made

Without? So some people dont like vamps? Thats not a hot take, its just retarded. Let us have our hot vampire waifus. They give that GOOD succc, eh mate? Want them to gently nibble on my dick and and slurp my lifeblood like Kool-aid

Be concise, be precise. Hate having to look up some needlesly archaic word. I have google but i dont wanna have to pull it out ever other sentence

There is also a "proper" way. I mean, Brandon Sanderson does a fantastic job of worldbuilding, but he doesnt always hold your hand and bog you down with info dumps. A lot of stuff relies on context, and any deeper lore is conveniently found at the back.

Yep. Sometimes a red door is just a red door.

It aint about looking smart. Its about having 🌟 style 🌟 Within reason at least. I dont need a 7 syllable word for calling someone useless. Calling them a worthless cunt is enough

The "show dont tell" line is mostly bullshit used by pseudo-intellectuals who want to sound smart. Theres a time to be descriptive and maybe flowery, but its a novel not a movie. Dont overly focus on trying to be deep and meaningful with every sentence.

Holy fuck you too? I had enough lasagna to feed a family of 5 and had to flush my baby down the toilet like the highschool slut on prom night.

well the dialogue itself is only part of it. To evoke the correct feeling, you need to have your description skills down pat. Once you can do that, the dialogue can be colored in any tone you please. I suggest going back to some of your favorite stories and learn from what those authors did...

Note: Only asking here cuz a lot of anime have very similar themes and concepts, so despite having a strong candidate in mind i cant be sre its the one im thinking of since it doesnt hit all the boxes i recall it having Long story short a buddy(?) on discord and i were talking about Platinum...

the answer is to touch grass, mate, Remember all your talks with the boys? The homies? the bros? Just do that but make it less gay EDIT: To be clear, know that realistic dialogue is not the same as good dialogue. Remember the autistic nonsense convos you have between you and the boys at the pub...

Gumbo. Its savory, sexy, and has fucking everything in that bitch