Recent content by Gedd

Oh, alright. Thanks! I think I shouldn’t double-post, though. . . .?

Hola! I don’t know if this should be posted here, but I’m writing a story (link below) and looking for some constructive feedback/criticism. If you have a few minutes (hours) to spare, would you mind doing this stranger a favour? I’m looking for feedback in terms of dialogue (how do you feel...