Recent content by LessThanSavory

Thanks for the suggestions! I'd planned something similar for a little later on, but after rereading, I kind of feel like it might be better to move it up to before smut stuff happens. I was trying to avoid the MC getting too incel-y or motivated-only-by-weird-pseudo-incest-y, but I seem to...

Hmm... depends on if they get prep time.

Thanks for the feedback! I definitely want to improve the subtlety aspect, given that it's a corruption story and all, so thanks for pointing it out. As for the MC's relationship with his family... I'm a bit stumped on that one. The original idea was something along the lines of "his...

Really tragic. Twenty three years old is just too young, no matter what. Hope his family ends up okay.

Much appreciated. I'll definitely try to improve how I do dialogue in particular, and probably go back and redo some chapters once I feel like I've got the hang of it.

Well, it's not well written, but it's also doesn't have a lot of actual smut, so maybe that balances out somewhat? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/501791/inherent-skill-of-corruption/stats/ I'd appreciate it in this thread, if you don't mind.

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I hadn't really considered how dull the dialogue would be with just dialogue. I'd originally taken out a lot of the tone descriptors and mid-dialogue actions because it seemed too busy and it felt like the conversation was stilted, but it seems I ended up...

Something something "I'm not a good writer myself, and my opinion is totally subjective and possibly influenced by reading too many low quality webnovels rather than any actual knowledge of what im talking about, so take my words with a whole brick of salt." That said, I like a lot of it. It's...

MCs who are down to kill every living thing in a country because some random dickhead bumped into him or something. Like, we get it, OP is so strong and such a badass, he doesn't have to commit genocide every other week to show it off. Actually, any trope that takes the super strong MC we're...

Not sure if you mind R-18 stories, but if you don't I can always use more feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/501791/inherent-skill-of-corruption/stats/

I'd say yes. In fact, I'd say that conversely, there's little to no meaning if your only goals are centered around your own personal satisfaction. We just plain can't fill our psychological needs caring only for ourselves. We'd just end up quickly spiraling into dissatisfaction and depression...

I'm a huge fan of the genre, so overabundance is a plus for me. Yeah, it means wading through a lot of garbage, but I actually find some of the garbage kind of fun and the rare actual good story makes it worth the trouble.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/501791/inherent-skill-of-corruption/stats/ I'd love feedback here, if you don't mind.

Huh, hadn't realized they look like that. I'm not exactly sure how that happened, but thanks for pointing it out. I'll set the first two chapters to match the rest.

I appreciate the compliment! As for getting views: I assume it's just being what people here are into. Incest, smut, and mind control tags have been a lot of where I get views from, apparently.