I'll name them Munmun, short for Jörmungandr :blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two:
Start writing your story in your mother tongue, establish your skills with your mother tongue first and then if you think your skills are stable enough you can consider writing in another language. Write in a language that you feel comfortable with :)
If i want something filthy i go for cock if i want bland i go for dick if want to scientific i go penis if i want to go ultimax humour i go for extremely descriptive name and stuff for an almost obsolete organ
Generation names are names given to members of the family born in the same generation for example, if the elders of the family decide that all children born on the same generation has to have the character "Bai" in their name then it would be followed, so all children of that generation will...
If it's in 3rd person, I use a mix of the 2 & 3, It would be a narration but I'd occasionally slip in the character's thoughts about it as the flashback goes
When I write a flash back in the middle of the chapter I do it via the character so I end up writing it like this:
The memory comes unbidden to his mind,
Then I'd make a new paragraph that writes out the event. Depending on what the story needs I'd either summarize the memory with a few...
Thanks everyone! Most of the comments that are left don't really point out what made it weak and yeah maybe I have to put more context in a way that my readers would be able to absorb it without braining too much! I do use the unreliable narrator tag when I feel that it would be a major plot...
One of the things I've noticed about writing is that whenever I write POV about my main character from another character's eyes or my main character's POV is that when my side character's description of the events or person differed from how the MC narrated the event or saw the other character...