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    Recommendations Your works?

    Reviving this for the sole purpose that after a long time I finally wrote something Crab and Corn Egg Drop Soup
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    Apparently the rainy season brings back my muse and words...heres to hoping I can complete a...

    Apparently the rainy season brings back my muse and words...heres to hoping I can complete a story for once = ̄ω ̄=
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    What would you name a snake?

    I'll name them Munmun, short for Jörmungandr :blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two:
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    Writing Please help me, how to become a good writer

    Start writing your story in your mother tongue, establish your skills with your mother tongue first and then if you think your skills are stable enough you can consider writing in another language. Write in a language that you feel comfortable with :)
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    A man's private area. (18+)

    If i want something filthy i go for cock if i want bland i go for dick if want to scientific i go penis if i want to go ultimax humour i go for extremely descriptive name and stuff for an almost obsolete organ
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    *gets inspired* *opens google doc* *stares at keyboard* words???? G0ne?????!!!

    *gets inspired* *opens google doc* *stares at keyboard* words???? G0ne?????!!!
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    Help with CN naming system.

    nothing beyond what @flucket already said :3
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    Help with CN naming system.

    Generation names are names given to members of the family born in the same generation for example, if the elders of the family decide that all children born on the same generation has to have the character "Bai" in their name then it would be followed, so all children of that generation will...
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    How do you write a flashback into the middle of a chapter?

    If it's in 3rd person, I use a mix of the 2 & 3, It would be a narration but I'd occasionally slip in the character's thoughts about it as the flashback goes
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    How do you write a flashback into the middle of a chapter?

    When I write a flash back in the middle of the chapter I do it via the character so I end up writing it like this: The memory comes unbidden to his mind, Then I'd make a new paragraph that writes out the event. Depending on what the story needs I'd either summarize the memory with a few...
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    Am I writing it wrong or are my readers just dumb?

    Yeah I wrote one in first pov and the other stories in 3rd Person
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    Haha thank you very much ヽ(´ー`)ノ

    Haha thank you very much ヽ(´ー`)ノ
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    Am I writing it wrong or are my readers just dumb?

    Thanks everyone! Most of the comments that are left don't really point out what made it weak and yeah maybe I have to put more context in a way that my readers would be able to absorb it without braining too much! I do use the unreliable narrator tag when I feel that it would be a major plot...
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    Am I writing it wrong or are my readers just dumb?

    One of the things I've noticed about writing is that whenever I write POV about my main character from another character's eyes or my main character's POV is that when my side character's description of the events or person differed from how the MC narrated the event or saw the other character...
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    Honorifics used in cultivation novels

    so does this mean I'd use the same appellations even with disciples for other sects?
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