Recent content by LunaCampari

I think I got an idea. I will change the premise a little to fit the situation of the MC more. I think I will add a third character to dramatize the situation: MC gets Mission ahead of time Proceeds to let her following apologize regardless Then MC wants to seperate herself from the apology and...

Sounds good, had to reread your first reply but it really is the same idea. *facepalm* :blob_hide:

Nearly, the moment she graps the initiatve to apologies the mission comes. She is unable to speak an apology but was able to let her former following (four arrogant nobles) apologies. Then the mission comes.

Hi, thanks for the reply first of all. I think you accidently switched my setting. The Game System issued the 'humilation' mission as a respone to the MC trying to apologize so yeah, I want to make the apology real but ain't sure how to handle the turn after that.

Hi everyone, so I started posting my story on ScribbleHub after securing a few chapters but I am now stuck on an event. The setting is a female modern citizien who got sucked into an Otome game as the Villainess. In this event the MC wants her former following to apologise to the original...

Hmm, int that case, I would include all tags but set a reminder (maybe in the Author's notes) that some of the tags will only happen in the future. Also, name these tags there. For example war and power struggles, you can add these tags to your story and mention that they will only happen in...

I think it looks pretty good. Where did you commision it?

I think it depends. I tend to correct and edit my stories however, I wouldn't edit a story from let's say five years ago as long as I am roughly statisfied with them and there are of decent quality.

Just found your new response. Theia is really fitting but I will double check every world name sugesstion before I use it. Can't believe that slipped my mind... My favorites right now are: Diatheia (because it is really fitting) and Caelum (because then I would have Mare and Caelum as Latin...

... Should I be honest? ... I didn't notice and genuiely liked it :blob_hide: ... Let's mash up other words. :blob_sweat:

That sounds interesting, I will have to go through all these jewels again... Hmm, thanks but I think the name is a little common and it doesn't really fit with the rest. Thanks really for that answer. I will go through it slowly but my favorite right now is Caelum. Also the reason why many of...

The basic theme which I adhere to in my world is about stones and jewels. Every characters name is based on a jewel, Mare is so far the only exception becaue I couldn't find a fitting (and good sounding) jewel and stone. Other names include: Rubien (ruby), Saphiér (sapphire) and Emerald (well...

Hello everyone, I am a new writer on Scribble Hub and right now, I am working on a larger fantasy story setting for my new story. However I run out of ideas about how I should call my world. I gave two of the important kingdoms the names: Mare (because it stands for the sea and tranquility) and...

I do agree with this statement but I would add that you can read the title in number three better. Also I think the artwork of number one and three is really good. So all in all I would go with option 3 as long as the MC's character can go along with the confident theme.

You could try to translate the words water, sea or ocean into another language and use that pronunciation: e.g: water in chinese is shuí or how about Anguana - a demon whose name means water