For future reference, I can't fix anything if it's to vague to discern anything being said.
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It something how many issues you find when you rewrite it again after a while: having to rearrange the order of some events.
At least now I know what to pursue, art wise.
As per the suggestion from a friend on discord, decided to seperate out the side stories into seperate books. Thanks for the tip.
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