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    First 5 chapters feedback exchange It has 5 chapters as of now. Just what i needed.
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Hi! Can you take a look at this too? It's my first time writing a story online so I need feedback to further enhance my writing skills in the future. The premise is that every world in the universe has a time limit. The...