Hey There! My novel, The Evolution: Rise of the Heroes is focused on the nature of humans if they were to have their own powers. Whether they'll use it to the benefit of others or to themselves.
So I've thought of sharing your unique powers. It must have it's own drawback for example...
Like I said, I'm hardly one to talk to. But There are a lot of ways out there. I always tell this to my fellow classmates who's doing their essay:
Think of yourself as the audience.
What do I want to see?
Why do I want to continue reading this?
What makes this different from the rest of the...
Probably make your Synopsis a little more, hooky to the audience? I'm hardly one to talk, though.
Since that's the first thing the audience will check. If this novel is worth it to read, y'know.
Chapters could have been a little longer. Synopsis is really important to hook your audience, so you need a really attention-catching synopsis. Not that I'm any better at it.
As for the plot, it's really hard to tell if it's good or not, since it's still at 2 chapters. But so far, you're doing good. Just becareful of the system thing, because it might backfire.
I guess, but what I meant is the kind of thriller that the Game of Thrones has. The thrill of who's gonna die next? You know, that's the kind of write I aspire to be.
I mean, I'm an amateur writer at all, but I prefer doing action and thriller. The kind of thriller that puts the audience at the edge of their seats, waiting for the next thing that's gonna happen. If you sucessfully do that, then you're a really good writer.