Recent content by TheTrinary

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    Another First Chapter+ Feedback

    I'd be happy with some harsh criticism. See story on the left of my sig. If you don't mind double dipping, story on my right. That one doesn't work and I'm not sure how to tweak it yet.
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    How do you find motivation?

    I just remind myself that I'll be dead someday. I'm not even joking. It's a big motivator. Better use the time you have.
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    Writing Prompt Write in 2nd Point of View

    It's a legitimate novel, published through an honest to God publisher, written entirely in second person. It's an artistic choice and weird as hell. But. . . it works. Also it's a sequel, so you can't jump right into it. The first book in the trilogy is written normal.
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    Writing Prompt Write in 2nd Point of View

    Ever read Harrow the Ninth?
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    What is wrong with this snek?

    That's a dope cover
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    Yea medium does not equal genre.
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    Breastfeeding Song Suggestions

    Play it songs in a language it doesn't know. Keep doing it. See if your baby becomes bilingual just from breastfeeding music. Report the results for science.
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    May we suggest genres to be added to the list?
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Yea, I watched like half an episode just to see after reading it and it was kind of awful. Wouldn't recommend it. But to be fair, lot people die in the original.
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    Ban the person above you!

    Banned for spelling phoenix like a Frenchie.
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    Sell Me Your Story in 3 Sentences or Less

    Got a bunch of Cormac McCarthy's around here.
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    Sell Me Your Story in 3 Sentences or Less

    Title: Syche, The Dark Element. (1) Normal guy tries to be the chosen one. (2) Never gets to control the elements. (3) Probably makes things worse.
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    Writing Ideas for cool superpowers?

    It would be a fun idea to explore then. It'd be the point in the story where the MC has figure out how to use their powers. They have to let a friend in on it and have them watch through a camera to see if it works. If you went down the path where a camera still makes you invisible, there's a...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Yea I kind of got that he was from a different world based on the description, but he mentions there being elves in his world. As long as it's not Earth -> fantasy world, that's a pretty good idea. Italics are a great way to deal with thoughts. Not the only way, but for the love of God don't...