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    I made my novel cover using AI

    And change the story title.
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    I have improved!

    Do you need to raise your right arm straight forward to say those words?
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    Your thoughts on the Minotaur

    Just create your own damned demons. Better if they are human.
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    I wanted to become a freelancer artist but I'm not confident on my drawings

    Hair is good. So are eyes and lips. The general body shape is good and the shading is the best. You just need to treat your drawings like authors treat their books. Consider your finished drawings as the first draft and keep working on them.
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    If you haven't stalled or blown up your engine, he's another one for you to test drive. My daily superhero system
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    If you are still upto it: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/957908/my-daily-superpower-system/
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Thanks for taking the time and doing this. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/957908/my-daily-superpower-system/
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Thanks for the hard work. Here's the story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/957908/my-daily-superpower-system/
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    What does Insights feature actually show?

    It tells you where your readers are from. So you can schedule your chapters accordingly.
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    What comes to you naturally?

    So you crippled the plant? Shame on you! jk
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    How to defeat procrastination.

    Procrastination... I know what it is and how to get over it... I'm just too tired to write it down.
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    My characters are trying to hide the fact that people in a small town were trapped in a mirror world

    is there any difference in their lives in the two worlds? If not then let it be. If yes, then explore options. If yes, then I would make it so the whole village appeared in that place out of nowhere and the neighboring villages and lords would trouble them. But that's for you to decide.
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    Writing How to write a Mute Character

    I would use it for comedic relief. Like he's a new assassin on his first task to kill this normal mc or someone else, but his intentions are misunderstood. He's perched atop a tree with a bow, but the mc misunderstands that he's hunting pigeons and climbs the tree to help him. Then they eat it...
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    What are people's thoughts on hard vocabulary?

    If you want to portray authentic pirate speak, then go for an Irish accent.
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