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(Changed the mouth a bit)

I ain’t no Pablo Picasso, but It’s better than my usual half finished doodles. Any critique?

Also, the rest of his body has been omitted due to lack of skill.
 
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Get rid of the mouth. It looks better without it.
 

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Hmm, either the face is too broad or the eyes too big.
But take my opinion with a grain of salt since I like long and slim faces and detailed eyes :blob_cookie:

Btw, are you mouse user?
 

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Hmm, either the face is too broad or the eyes too big.
But take my opinion with a grain of salt since I like long and slim faces and detailed eyes :blob_cookie:

Btw, are you mouse user?
Nah I just drew it on a tablet while I was procrastinating. It felt like doodling so I drew an eye and black hair and slapped the two together. I want to draw pretty eyes, but I can’t draw much else so he’s just a culmination of “pretty eye practice” and my own inner edgelord.


also:
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He looks kinda...malnourished...
 

tiaf

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Nah I just drew it on a tablet while I was procrastinating. It felt like doodling so I drew an eye and black hair and slapped the two together. I want to draw pretty eyes, but I can’t draw much else so he’s just a culmination of “pretty eye practice” and my own inner edgelord.


also:
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He looks kinda...malnourished...
Nah, his cheeks are plump. It’s just the light and the panda eyes that makes him look pale and slightly sick.
 

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View attachment 3814(Changed the mouth a bit)

I ain’t no Pablo Picasso, but It’s better than my usual half finished doodles. Any critique?

Also, the rest of his body has been omitted due to lack of skill.
It looks great!
:blob_neutral: I think I lack the ability to draw slim faces.
I think you should draw a circle and then draw a tringle under it (kinda like an ice cream cone) and just take it from there
 
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