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@Sayasiapa
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YOU ARE SUS BRUH, :blob_popcorn:
 

Assurbanipal_II

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We live in a laicist society. Content guidelines for religions are superfluous. :blob_evil_two:

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Otherwise, I also want content guide lines for my Rommel church. We worship the holy Tiger tank who formed the world out of Kruppstahl.
 
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I just skimmed the whole book and felt like I read an encyclopedia.
There is so much info-dumping that I don't know what's happening. I came from Indonesia then instantly came to Japan.
If the author sees this I suggest lessening the amount of information in the characters and the history of nations and instead focus on the story instead.

But don't take this seriously as there are many details I left out since I just skimmed it.

Anyways
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I just skimmed the whole book and felt like I read an encyclopedia.
There is so much info-dumping that I don't know what's happening. I came from Indonesia then instantly came to Japan.
It did feel like I was reading a weird mix between a history book and a journal.
 

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I admit as a history fanatic myself the novel is interesting.

But bruh, it feels like I'm reading a missionary novel. In my entire life, even if I'm shameless as fuck I wouldn't bring my religion into a novel to make people saw it so great. I wouldn't make a novel about a missionary from Italy bringing Bible to the Arabs and make them Christian while saying "LONG LIVE JESUS, GOD IS GREAT. MOTHER MARY IS GREAT".

Here's some text from the novel,

After a week in Sunda Kelapa, the invited guests withdrew to their respective regions and began to introduce the Indonesian Caliphate to its citizens in their region. The capital city of this country is the city of Bogor, with the area, the Malay peninsula, Sumatra, Java, Kalimantan, Sulawesi, Maluku, and the Lesser Sunda Islands as the starting area.



August 17, 1521 the establishment of the Indonesian Caliphate, its territory quickly expanded to Burma Myanmar, Khmer Cambodia, and Champa.
When the country was 79 years old in 1600 AD, Diplomats from the Ming Dynasty wanted to establish political relations with the Indonesian Caliphate. Since then the Indonesian Caliphate is famous for its rapidly growing military, the Navy as the second strongest navy in Asia after the Ming Dynasty, and after that is Tokugawa Ieyasu which is none other than Japan.
"Luckily we have a very wise leader, I wish the Caliph a long life!" One The people of the city of Sunda Kelapa or Jayakarta made people follow him who praised the Caliph Muhammad Al-Fatih.
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!" Starting from the community Jayakarta city residents penetrated all parts of Indonesia until they heard the Ming dynasty in mainland China.
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!"
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!" that voice continued to reverberate nineteen times and this event became an important history of a prosperous Indonesian Caliphate.
(I remind you once again! This is fictitious! Only my dream as a writer, sorry if anyone protests but this is only for entertainment).

You maybe won't understand how I feel iffy about this so let me change it.


After a week in Jacksonville, the invited guests withdrew to their respective regions and began to introduce the America Caliphate to its citizens in their region. The capital city of this country is the city of Jacksonville, with the area, Texas, Lousiana, Mississippi, Alabama, Georgia, Florida, South Carolina as the starting area.

August 17, 1521 the establishment of the American Caliphate, its territory quickly expanded to California, New York, Montana, and even Washington. It's basically covered up the entire USA

When the country was 79 years old in 1600 AD, Diplomats from the Ming Dynasty wanted to establish political relations with the American Caliphate. Since then the American Caliphate is famous for its rapidly growing military, the Navy as the second strongest navy in America after the Ming Dynasty, and after that is Tokugawa Ieyasu which is none other than Japan.
"Luckily we have a very wise leader, I wish the Caliph a long life!" One The people of the city of Jacksonville made people follow him who praised the Caliph Muhammad Al-Fatih.
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!" Starting from the community Jacksonville city residents penetrated all parts of America until they heard the Ming dynasty in mainland China.
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!"
“Long live the Caliph! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest! Allah is the Greatest!" that voice continued to reverberate nineteen times and this event became an important history of a prosperous American Caliphate.
(I remind you once again! This is fictitious! Only my dream as a writer, sorry if anyone protests but this is only for entertainment).

I can name another part that makes me iffy but I'm too lazy (so you should read it yourself). I strongly think that bringing your religion into a novel is a stupid decision, This type of novel should be kept on yourself and not published.
 
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:blob_popcorn: Don't mind me . . . unless you want to give my story one star because of how I bring up multiple religions, starting with Chapter 21.
 

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I don't see the point of complaint.

It's a fictional story, the author has the right to portray their ideologies in their own story, that is not a problem.

We have Religious Novels IRL too, having a Religious Novel in Scribbly shouldn't be a problem.

You can have racist characters in novels, and you can also have religious characters in novels too. I get that it might make you feel troubled due to RL religions being depicted, but I don't see why that is a real issue.
 

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I bet he wouldn't be this salty if this was shintoism or buddhism spreading idk.
 

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@Sayasiapa You are just salty bruh because you are Jewish, and with all this toxic accusation you've got just because you can't make a missionary-looking novel like Mr. R5Rakitan, bruh, I know you just mad because you can't be a priest and steal all the money as you grace all people with the words in a book called the bible, or maybe because you are the messenger of messiah and you can't stand religions because you are a weeb, my boy, bababababooooy, twomad is mad at you and so do my raging nut.
 

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:blob_popcorn: Don't mind me . . . unless you want to give my story one star because of how I bring up multiple religions, starting with Chapter 21.
You do bring up religion, but you don't depict how great they are, that's totally still on acceptable line. But the author here depicts it differently.
I don't see the point of complaint.

It's a fictional story, the author has the right to portray their ideologies in their own story, that is not a problem.

We have Religious Novels IRL too, having a Religious Novel in Scribbly shouldn't be a problem.

You can have racist characters in novels, and you can also have religious characters in novels too. I get that it might make you feel troubled due to RL religions being depicted, but I don't see why that is a real issue.
Yeah, this is also what Iran/Irak people say before ISIS brainwashed their kids. (tHiS iS JuST LiTeRATurE it wOn'T MAkE uS BecOMe exTRemiST (Totally Right GOOD JOB)). Do you know that Japan can actually spread out Shintoism by depicting them as something great in anime/manga/LN that consumed by people around the world? but why they don't do it?.

I bet he wouldn't be this salty if this was shintoism or buddhism spreading idk.
I'm not salty, I'm just cringey as fuck seeing how a real-life religion depicted as something so great. I'll also feel cringe if my Religion depicted like that. Religion is a sacred issue just like Race and Ethnicity , You can bring them as long as it on the right portion.

@Sayasiapa You are just salty bruh because you are Jewish, and with all this toxic accusation you've got just because you can't make a missionary-looking novel like Mr. R5Rakitan, bruh, I know you just mad because you can't be a priest and steal all the money as you grace all people with the words in a book called the bible, or maybe because you are the messenger of messiah and you can't stand religions because you are a weeb, my boy, bababababooooy, twomad is mad at you and so do my raging nut.
I got nothing to say at this...This guy is a braindead(and pls learn some English correctly).
You just pointed my religion (I'm not Jewish) and you accused the Jewish Priest is stealing all the money, You already violated the forum rules. Talk about a boy, I think you don't have a nuts bruh. Please kindly ask ur mom if you're a girl when you're born because if you want to have an argument, you have to make the basis of it not just ranting at people like some crazy old man.
 
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