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  • I think I've finally found my groove when making web novel videos. At least with this new idea.
    It's not Halloween anymore, but I just finished writing the most grotesque and awful thing I could come up with. Took me forever to figure out how to structure it.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    It's 8 pages and needs editing. I'll post my last Spoopy Story tomorrow.
    Dressing up as a ninja for tonight's chess tournament too much?
    BenJepheneT
    BenJepheneT
    this chad walks in dressed as a shinobi, checkmates through the competition and walks the fuck out

    save some pussy for the rest of us, damn
    Nahrenne
    Nahrenne
    Congrats on winning it all, TTrin!
    Did you win anything for it?
    |.o)

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    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    Haha. People were making jokes in the opposite. Saying I was jsut going to vanish when I made a blunder. But yeah, all tournaments require entry fees and have cash prizes.
    The 2nd part of my trilogy!

    Armored99
    Armored99
    yeah watched dune, it kinda reminded me off Destiny in 2014. You had this big game with a lot in it. But the story mainly took place in just five missions and the game had like fifty total missions. However, if you looked outside the game to a secondary source the companion app you could get tons of in depth lore. Which is kinda like the dune movie to the dune books.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    That's an interesting comparison. Unfortunately one is a game and one is a movie.
    Well I sat down to film 1 video and got 90 minutes of footage, so I guess I actually filmed my next 2 videos.

    And I need to do a Halloween one too. Guess which book I'll be talking about?
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    I'm not sure how we got to this point.
    Armored99
    Armored99
    Well first I insulted you as being a wimp by saying this kids scary story book would be what you'd read. Then Ben looked through the authors works for the most questionable one and posted it.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    Ohhhh I totally forgot metioning the Halloween thing. That's on me.
    I feel like I became a better writer today.
    gogo7966
    gogo7966
    getting better is always a good feeling
    BenJepheneT
    BenJepheneT
    stephen chanelling his power to write the filthiest interspecies gay dragon anal porn the smut community's ever seen

    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    No. . . . I don't think that I will.
    I need writing advice: For my next spooky story, I'm going to have an 1800's British adventurer in a foreign land and the punchline being a pretty horrific cultural difference. What would be the least offense people to base it on?
    BenJepheneT
    BenJepheneT
    the amish
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    I don't know if you're being serious or not, but that kind of works. Not the Amish obviously, but I could make up some sort of Christian cult.
    BenJepheneT
    BenJepheneT
    im not joking. just have some caucasian native group and you'd get an instant pass.
    Time to talk about something I love!

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    Armored99
    Armored99
    Makes me wonder is it easier to think up new and original things nowadays or is it harder? We have so much more access, but so many big ideas have already been taken.

    Also the nuke thing is a pretty big plot hole.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    That's what they say right? There are no new ideas. There are just new combinations of ideas. For example, one of the freshest ideas I've seen in a long time is Attack on Titan. The base ideas aren't new: steam punk spider man vs. norse giants. It's all been done before but feels totally fresh.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    I'm going to cover it soon, but the second book is the boring one. It's probably the one where most people put it down and decide to not read the series. Which is fine, each book works as an end. But it's also a shame because the third and fourth books are my favorites.
    I just say Dune. Finally. Pretty good. Straight vibing with the music and visuals. Acting was flat as hell.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    I mean, a numerical score is still subjective. But hey. I'll give it a 7/10. It really was the best looking movie I've seen in a long time and as someone who's read the books I wasn't missing any plot beats. I would be really interested to hear from someone who hasn't read the books. It might be a totally different experience.
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    If you love brutalism, this movie is for you.
    BenJepheneT
    BenJepheneT
    well, im the kinda guy that considers brick mansions a form of art, so maybe I'll go take a look.
    Got my first mean youtube comment. Actually took long than I thought considering some of my reviews. The funny thing is that it wasn't in response to those.
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    LostLibrarian
    LostLibrarian
    The writing guide: "This is like one of those written guides, only longer, less informative and incredibly annoying. Stick to writing, at least you got the voice for that."
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    Heyo there it is. Yeah, it was on the video essay.
    Nahrenne
    Nahrenne
    'o'

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    I swear the WW is coming out sometime today, but I had to stop everything and make the greatest piece of art humankind has ever seen.
    Join me on the weekly round up tomorrow as we discuss how to write sex scenes that aren't cringe and where I accidently stumble onto the greatest comedic premise for a story.
    I had the best chapter comment I've ever seen on something I wrote. Feeeeelsssss goooooodd.
    gogo7966
    gogo7966
    epiku
    LostLibrarian
    LostLibrarian
    "Thanks for the chapter"?
    TheTrinary
    TheTrinary
    Haha no, I've had those before. Someone saying my new spooky story was extremely horrific.
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