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  melchi

• Mar 17, 2023

Was reading a novel on RR and the author said to write a comment about what you didn't like before downvoting the fiction. I wrote "Your second chapter has a scene where a heroine says today is the best day . . . then zombies attack"

Author replies it is supposed to be confusing and uncanny.

Me: . . .

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  melchi

• Mar 15, 2023

Someone explained to me diabolus ex machina and now I see it everywhere.

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  Ilikewaterkusa

• Mar 15, 2023

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  melchi

• Mar 13, 2023

Thinks that people who are anonymous should have a Guy Fawkes mask as an avatar.

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  melchi

• Mar 9, 2023

Here, have a cute slime girl.

and a weird one.

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  melchi

• Feb 28, 2023

So I was reading fake saint of the year and the protag starts spending all his time working out. Apparently that route leads to the muscle ending where they don't romance any of the love interests. Though there is an ending where if they get into a mansion by impressing the guards with their muscles leads to a CG where it is several guys flexing together and smiling. Sounds like a BL ending >_<

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  melchi

• Feb 27, 2023

I feel like kinda stupid, novelupdates has a bunch of stuff tagged shojo ai and I thought it was some kind of girl machine intelligence.

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  melchi

• Feb 24, 2023

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  melchi

• Feb 24, 2023

Still failing at getting AI to generate a slime girl but this one is kinda cool I think.

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  melchi

• Feb 19, 2023

Anyone else think it gets harder to continue a story as the word count starts to get close to 100k?

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  melchi

• Feb 4, 2023

Was trying to go for a dryad magical girl sitting on a throne but this one doesn't look bad. Clothing could be better but oh well.

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  melchi

• Feb 3, 2023

This one is not perfect but I still like it.

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  melchi

• Jan 20, 2023

It seems weird that the chapter named nymph has 100 more views than the one before it and the one after it.

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  melchi

• Jan 15, 2023

Some attempts at one of my story's characters.

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  melchi

• Jan 15, 2023

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  melchi

• Jan 12, 2023

Which one is better?

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  melchi

• Jan 9, 2023

Got another chapter out, 4k words and still didn't get the story as far as I wanted. Does anyone else have this problem?

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  melchi

• Jan 6, 2023

Trying to get a boy operating a great wheel making thread. I think I need to lower my expectations.

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  melchi

• Jan 4, 2023

That day when you get a paper cut handling paperwork. Then an hour later stab yourself with a staple.

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  melchi

• Dec 29, 2022

Bleh, this one would have been good except for the messed up hands. Why is it always the hands?