Anyone edit your story with the hopes of streamlining things and although you delete lots of stuff and rewrite a few things it turns out longer instead of shorter?
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Was reading a novel on RR and the author said to write a comment about what you didn't like before downvoting the fiction. I wrote "Your second chapter has a scene where a heroine says today is the best day . . . then zombies attack"
Author replies it is supposed to be confusing and uncanny.
Me: . . .
Someone explained to me diabolus ex machina and now I see it everywhere.
Thinks that people who are anonymous should have a Guy Fawkes mask as an avatar.
Here, have a cute slime girl.
and a weird one.
So I was reading fake saint of the year and the protag starts spending all his time working out. Apparently that route leads to the muscle ending where they don't romance any of the love interests. Though there is an ending where if they get into a mansion by impressing the guards with their muscles leads to a CG where it is several guys flexing together and smiling. Sounds like a BL ending >_<
I feel like kinda stupid, novelupdates has a bunch of stuff tagged shojo ai and I thought it was some kind of girl machine intelligence.
Still failing at getting AI to generate a slime girl but this one is kinda cool I think.
Anyone else think it gets harder to continue a story as the word count starts to get close to 100k?
Was trying to go for a dryad magical girl sitting on a throne but this one doesn't look bad. Clothing could be better but oh well.
This one is not perfect but I still like it.
It seems weird that the chapter named nymph has 100 more views than the one before it and the one after it.
Some attempts at one of my story's characters.
Which one is better?
Got another chapter out, 4k words and still didn't get the story as far as I wanted. Does anyone else have this problem?
Trying to get a boy operating a great wheel making thread. I think I need to lower my expectations.
That day when you get a paper cut handling paperwork. Then an hour later stab yourself with a staple. -
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