These sensitive Americans and their content and trigger warnings. A reader is complaining that they want a traumatising and gore tag, just cuz a child died. They shouldn't watch news then.
I've read a bit more, finished Arc 1. First of all, no amount of threats or bribes will make me read more. Your story is simply not my cup of tea. Secondly, as I've predicted, I saw no incomprehensible stuff, weird sentences, or mistakes apart from one typo. A housand burning metal needles were driven through