Okay okay, first of all, this is amazing, the first one in particular.
Next I’m curious, just like the guy above. I recognize the font to be from Campfire, but did you use photoshop or something similar to outline and decorate the actual map?
So I've reuploaded everything, while also making some important minor changes. I feel that the best time for me to do the reworking of the old ones is either when I finish my current arc, or when I'm done with the entire story, and to be honest I'm really leaning towards...
And thinking about it now, you're right @flucket .
Alright, I'm just going to stick with my guns. After all of this is done and my first sort of "volume" is complete, I'm going to go back and edit it, just like @RedPanda said.
I'll figure it out. Thanks everyone for your replies.
I'm really embarrassed that you remember that old mess up of mine (And this upcoming mess up too, which is an absolutely spectacular super yikes).
So on your numbered points.
1. I would do this for some minor changes such as dialogue choices or setting descriptions, but...
Thanks guys for your responses!
But I guess I kind of misworded my question. I’m 100% keeping the chapters I already have. I’m gonna build upon them on a separate file.
I kind of meant in the Scribblehub sense of delete. As in completely remove the chapter on the site and reupload it. The main...
So I’m kind of an extremely amateurish writer, and someone who gets pretty butt-hurt if I find something I don’t like in my previous chapters. Recently I’ve felt that something was off about my current writing, and found that I was extremely unhappy with how I handled the beginning...
Hey yo hey hey.
I'd be willing if you'll have me. 'Cause I've heard about the benefits of having an Accountability/Reading partner.
And I've been wanting a critique partner for some time as well (actually for a really long time, but eh)
How about it? :D
A trash can.
The legendary beholder of the puppet of unending anger and fury.
A puppet of who many of children were taught to fear.
Yes, the mage has indeed summoned the all-powerful god:
Oscar the Grouch
Oh wow, everyone has really interesting comments about how they've gotten their stories.
Meanwhile here's me, still abusing the tactic I've had since I was a kid: Utilizing fanfiction.
Ever since I was a kid I'd see a bunch of stories and be like, "that's cool" and then stuff the ideas into my...
Y'know in all honesty, writing in five hundred words sounds way harder than writing two thousand. I personally do go for the 2k threshold, and that usually comes naturally to me. But five hundred? Honestly, that sounds like a skill.
To clarify, I wanted to know what people's opinions are on using a "fake name" in the narrative.
Say there's a character named Sarah, and she introduces herself to other people as Rah (or whatever I fail at spontaneous names), because she's an incredibly cautious person and only uses...
Thanks so much!
Hopefully I can continue putting up this effort and doing more with it.
Also I've updated the chapter (only the paragraph breaks, as that's the only thing I have time for, for now). And I'll definitely use the video you've linked me.
Hey guys! Thanks so much for your support!
After all this time, and after so many months of writer's block I realized what my main, main problem was (aside from Characterization of course, haha). And that was my desire to go straight to the big picture rather than the smaller.
I love stories...
Jesus Christ there's so much!
I'm in the middle of class right now, but guys, thanks so much for replying to the post!
I have been starved for criticisms like this, and although it does kind of sting, I absolutely see my problems and issues here.
So I've decided to do a complete rewrite...
Sorry I didn't read the first part of your post because I just went straight to the points.
As for how dedicated am I?
I am completely willing to go back and rewrite everything. And I literally mean everything. As I said in the previous post, I've already rewritten the story when it was just...
Thank you so much for your reply!
Gosh, I've been really needing someone like you for a while. While this may sound like an excuse, my way of writing is that I'm a write-as-I-go guy. And as this was my first chapter, I didn't know how I was going to start. I myself personally believe that...