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Considering Machiavelli's political and military career, I'd take that man's advice with more than just a pinch of salt.

Go to sleep, you have school tomorrow.

Please use commas and periods, my brain hurts.

Liking a story and offering patronizing suggestions are not the same. And please don't make this an issue about LGBTQ people in general. It's disrespectful to drag a whole community into an issue like this.

Most people have enough empathy to relate to characters so stories with emotional turmoil tend to impart at least some of those feelings to the reader. Generally, these stories have things like a tragedy or psychological tag to warn readers and a quick look at apple grotto nymph does not give...

People who are willing to watch me go through a whole villain arc within the course of 2 hrs and 17 min

Excessive circumcision

I should be more specific in my critique of English seeming to not be your first language. The first is that the tenses seem to occasionally shift between past and present. Always stick to one tense throughout a story, past tense is preferable. The narration just seems stiff and rigid. While the...

Not really a review but after skimming through, it feels like English isn't your first language. Plus the giant spaces between sentences is really visually unappealing. No need to review my stuff. I just pointed out some surface level things that can be improved to guarantee better ratings...