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    "The Eight Paths of the Hero’s Redemption"

    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH30
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    "The Eight Paths of the Hero’s Redemption"

    is the title of the chapter, not of the story. nop THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH28 Miriel unleashes her fury against a group of thieves led by an arrogant low-class assassin, showing her skill and coolness in a visceral fight.
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    "The Eight Paths of the Hero’s Redemption"

    Read this epic fantasy story: The Eight Paths of Hero's Redemption. Join Don and Miriel on a journey full of tensions, mysteries and unique characters, including an enigmatic flute player. With a raw style and vivid dialogue, this story immerses you in a world of adventure, moral conflict and...
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    Is it just me or do anyone else get turned off when authors bring irl politics and their nationalists jingoism to novels

    Well, it shouldn't be that big of a deal, I write that kind of stuff with kingdoms and so on, so I do need the politics but I still get my inspiration from the real world but it doesn't depend on my opinions or my ideological biases, but I think it's a matter of taste, because also the...
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    "The Mad King's Domain."

    Ch. 24 of In the Mind of the King is here. Can Montesis III escape his nightmare? A supaibi seeks revenge... and the king falls into panic. 🖤🔥 Do you dare to read it?
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    I'm listening to Devil and my ears have never heard anything so intense and perfect. It's too...

    I'm listening to Devil and my ears have never heard anything so intense and perfect. It's too beautifulo💘💘💘💘
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    thank you

    thank you
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    the piece mad queen and mad prince are divine, it could help me write strong tragedies, so...

    the piece mad queen and mad prince are divine, it could help me write strong tragedies, so ugly...heheheh
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    haha, I'm curious, can you pass it to me?

    haha, I'm curious, can you pass it to me?
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    "The Mad King's Domain."

    In the icy kingdom of Montesis, under the shadow of the Mad King, Montesis III, secrets that changed the course of history are hidden. A man who lived for more than twenty centuries, feared as a god, adored and hated alike. A king who unleashed genocides, who sacrificed queens and who harbors a...
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    "Hey everyone! I'm thrilled to announce that Chapter 22 is now live! Dive back into the world of Feirham and Astoria as Cleopatra and Calenmir navigate tense alliances and hidden secrets. Things are heating up with Zephyria's invasion looming—check it out and let me know what you think! 📖✨...
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    It's even more dangerous to throw so much shit on you bro, the only one who will say that you can here is you and then the person who will jump the desire to support your work. leave it here I want to see your story, to see how it is. you are absolutely right, many times personal tastes enter...
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    thanks I just solved that problem and it updates the first three chapters. I noticed it, you can smell it because of its humility at the beginning ajajjjaj
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    ok then I'm fine, it's intentional. ok thanks, I will make the changes. translation, and good premise. ok if someone wants to leave something else I am pending thanks.
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    I don't know how to answer you on each part, but thank you very much, I wait for other points of view before I do something, thanks for the effort. I understood several of the points if it is true that I had and still have a problem with the tenses of the verbs but good advice, for the other...
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    hello sincerely i am a bit overwhelmed, i could use the sincere opinion of other readers to know if there is a good or bad guy in the story, i have been creating it since i was 8 years old and i care a lot about the narrative. I would love to receive opinions, whether they are contrary or...
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    Recommendations The Shattered Throne: A Tale of Vengeance and Corruption

    ah donde bro ah ok, where should I post it bro ?
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    Recommendations The Shattered Throne: A Tale of Vengeance and Corruption

    In a world where power corrupts both the land and the soul, the ruthless Queen Calenmir of Zephyria seeks to reclaim her stolen territories, forging uneasy alliances with the cunning Cleopatra Ushnar of Astoria. But as their ambitions clash, a greater darkness looms—the Corruption, a force that...
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