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@Kara_dija I have had a chance to take a look at your book, Crimson Dreams. I did it with a healthy glass of iced peach tea, and sat outside listening to the surf right outside my house. So perfect setting to relax and read. For the purposes of our little gathering, I read the following...

Hi there!!! @roobYssence!! Thanks for dropping by. I have one lovely book ahead of yours, but I will indeed take a look at it. I've got plenty of Earl Gray. Sit back and relax. B does not brief me in the least. It's pride month after all! @rvie I will certainly take a look at it. Since...

Another lovely customer! I am excited to graciously handout more tea. I happen to have Earl Grey ready. So have a seat and let me take a look at this lovely work you've created.

@MindFudhe Unfortunately, you have broken Rule 2, by your own admission. -2- No AI please. It's hard enough for me to work the apps on my phone or get ignored when I'm trying to get support from an automated voice. I'm not doing it in my cafe. I want real coffee, tea and creamer. Let me show...

Oh boy. I haven't made a Caramel Latte in a bit. Let me grind the beans and I'm have your coffee in a little bit. Until then? Have a seat, chat with the others and I'll take a look at your story. You've managed to catch me right after I finished a pirate tale and have a bit of down time...

@CharlesEBrown I took a chance and looked into PocketFM, and while I enjoyed the look and feel of the stories listed there, it appeared to have a mountain of hoops to get listed. What's worse is that since a healthy chunk of my writing is erotica-romance, there's no chance for it to get...

I never really have. I simply write, update, write, update...I think I write and update. Once my brain is sufficiently a pool of goop, I respond in the forums with my books linked on my signature. Moral of the story? Don't worry about it. Keep writing and have fun. Once you start thinking...

Chapter 1: Chapter 2: I stopped after this. It's right at the line, so there is a small margin for error. If this is accidental, then simply fix it. But because you obviously used some AI and didn't indicate, I'm not reading it. Be well and I hope this helps.

Find the best place in the outline and work it in. There's always space in an outline to add new concepts. That's part of an outline anyway. Of all the things you can change on the fly, the outline is the easiest and best. You don't want to be in the middle of writing a chapter and go into a...

How to perform a lobotomy.

I have two completed books and I released them chapter by chapter as I wrote them. I suppose my different way is that I've outlined the main story, subplots with names and such long before I get to the actual chapter. So when I sit down, I can easily type 2500 words of a 9000 word chapter...

There's are about 6 different threads that the owner of will give you feedback. Pick one. Or two, or all.

Postitves: Grammar seems okay, I don't see any glaring issues. A couple of run-on sentences, nothing horrible. Some of the detailing good. You did a fine job of describing the Succubus. The rest? I found it uninteresting to read. Bland and boring. Main character alone was the typical - I...

I sent you a personal message.

Chapter 1. Chapter 2. Chapter 3. You want harshness? Write your own freaking novel instead of using AI. You don't have an ounce of originality by putting prompts in something and calling it a freaking "book" or "story". You want more? AI garbage. over 60% garbage. Whats more there is no tag...

@CharlesEBrown It took me a while to recover from the few Irish coffees I had while taking a look at your book Digital Cowboy. Since your story is both isekai and LitRPG, I knew the importance of reading this in order. It's been my experience that missing a certain skill or explanation will...

Irish Coffee. I have the Jameson's in the back under lock and key to keep the teenagers out. However, since I'm back there I'll grab some Bailey's Irish Cream to a just a little more kick. I'll be more than happy to take a look at Your story. Have a seat and I'll leave the bottle.

The café is open for business! I finished my latest chapter and have some spare time for iced coffee and Chai. So come on in and let me take a look at your things! Well, things being your writing.

What in the world? I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at other than prompts for AI. Why did you put this here?

I gave it an earnest try. I read most of your first chapter and then looked at the Synopsis. Which is a section of that chapter. The way it read to me way very disjointed, but based on the name of the book - that's the intent? I didn't like how the character seemed to fight with himself /...