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Hello. My story is close to chapter 15 and I decided that after publishing the 15th chapter, I will create Patreon page (+ other similar sites) I know that the usual thing is to have some amount of additional chapters (I plan on 5) on the site. But for me it feels too small. So my question is -...

Okay, I finished the 4th chapter before writing this. I really like it, looks like an isekai into Sett from League. MC is cool. Just few things - the name is super very ultra generic. Also gacha system is strangely explained. It sounded like the pulled abilities are consumed upon use or are...

There is no link and when I tried to search the name on SH I found nothing.

I would give it a try probably. Doing 'chaos' in a story can kill it or make it top tier, depening on how good it's done.

Well, I can't agree on the "START" thing. In most games "START" button is pretty much the first thing you press and see, except game's options or the producer's/developer's logo. And obviously story-wise it's good to explain things to Mc. But game/program -wise "START" is the first thing. As I...

Hello. I am writing this just after reading the 'Intro' chapter and here is what I can say. Keep in mind that I am pretty much new author myself, so don't take it too seriously. 1 - I think that the introduction to the world like this is a bit lazy and pretty much the same as most isekais -...

Hello, today I am asking for a feedback of my story - The Island of Wonder. As stated in the name, I just published 10th chapter and now the story has 24,249 total words count. I know it may be selfish or whatever, but I really ask for the feedback for the whole story and of not the first few...

I think you forgot to add a link to the story. Or I am just blind and can't find it.

So, basically story takes place on an island with tribe societies. And sex is not a taboo in the culture of the natives, though it's not 'free use' either. And even though Mc (female) wil have some more 'stable' relationships (harem?), there will be sex with partially strangers*. Also there may...

Well, I can agree that maybe I overdid Nicole's thoughts. I have no idea how to do the emotional aspects or romantic atmospthere at all, to be honest. Also I said it's big when compared to any other smut scene I wrote before. And maybe lack of context made it worse too. Anyways, thanks for the...

Don't know if you are still doing it here, but here is mine - The Island of Wonder Thanks

Hello. As the thread's title says, I wrote a bigger sex scene in my story and need feedback. Though I already did a few small ones, none of them were as big as this one. As the scene itself is at the end of the 6th chapter, you can jump right to it, or give the whole story a try. Feedback for...

So, that is the question. I tried to, but did not find any way to. Also, I went through some other stories and couldn't find any, so maybe that is just impossible. I wanted to put a map in there, since i already made one for myself to not mess up with the directions where characters go.

I know i am a little late but no, i use a tablet already :D Huion something something, don't remember the numbers

Hello. As you could guess by the name, here I am going to talk and pour my tilt of trying to learn drawing from nothing. Those are my actual first tries, so expect it to be bad, not gonna lie. Drawing in Krita, at least for now. Attempt 1 - The worst one. I just opened the app and started...

Well, yes. But that's why I am asking about experience of other authors.

Hello, I have a question to the authors. How hard is writing two different (or more) stories at once? I know concentrating on one is probably better, but I am wondering. I have at least 3 potential story ideas excluding the one I am writing already and I am afraid I will never get to use those...

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Hello, I have small question. Which type of showing stats is better? The one I have now (The numbers are same color as the ones in the table): ----------------------------- level: 15 Stats - Physical - Strength: 242 Dexterity: 160 Vitality: 225 Mental - Intelligence: 170 Willpower: 238...