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    Looking for first impressions on new story

    Well, yeah. The way I see it is that schadenfreude is more of an emotion while sadism is more of a trait. In that way, it's easily possible for a sadist to have strong feelings of schadenfreude even if they aren't the direct cause, but it's also obvious that they'd take equal pleasure in doing...
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    Looking for first impressions on new story

    The Royal Princess is a Sadist The premise in a nutshell: A certain princess indulges in the pleasure of sadism to fulfill her twisted desires, and in its own somewhat twisted and ironic way, for the good of others. It's really quite self explanatory. I'd just like some first impressions on...
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    Rewrite, edit, or continue on at end of arc?

    Heyo, it's me, a person who doesn't know what to do. To sum things up, I've just finished the first arc of my story, Cata Maestra. At this point, I'm stuck between the options of rewriting, editing, or just moving on. To go in a bit more in depth, I have just completed the Forest Arc, which...
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    The reason/or inspration behind one of your proudest works?

    a lot of fantasy world stories tend to be pretty laid back. obviously, there's some pretty serious ones, but most can fall into a pretty casual category. right now, i'm writing Cata Maestra. it fits into the category of fantasy stories that aren't so casual. there's obviously bits of comedy...
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    Want some feedback on new story

    The Loner Witch and the Troubles of Society Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, Slice of Life Synopsis: Being an immortal witch can come with many benefits. Some of these include not aging, immense power, and everything else you might expect. Unfortunately, an incomprehensibly long...
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    Looking for feedback on first chapter of my new story

    Hey, I recently just started working on a fantasy story that you can find here. Right now, I've only got one chapter done. But obviously, first impressions are important, right? So I want to have my first chapter critiqued and analyzed so I can 1. fix it up and 2. fix up later chapters. The...
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