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Interesting setting. Please give me a link if its out, hehe. This might not be what you're looking for but I hope this helps. This is from a perspective of a reader who don't prefer reading male MCs: MC don't treat their friends as henchmen but comrades. He can use people as tools, but if its...

I know it's kinda late, but welcome to SH! :blobtaco:

I don't mind well-executed predictable plots. But it irks me if the plot is too illogical, even for a parody. Although, I don't mind watching absurd anime like Asobi Asobase. It's just hard to pull of the same effect in lit.

I need help with my novel, specifically, the Title, Synopsis and Description. I'm looking readers who enjoyed read similar novels before and readers who are not actually fond of the trope. I think, both opinions are necessary. You can reply on this thread or message me. If you are also a...

Don't worry it's not harsh. I actually laughed aloud when you said you pity the person that will fall for her. Anyway thay you for the comment. It is the most detailed I received so far. If you have any suggestions, I am all ears.

I recommend having an option to enable or disable notifications for updates on novels on a specific reading list. I'm not online most of the time so rather than checling every single novel I'm reading, it will help if I'll just look at the notif section. Since it can be disabled too, it won't...

The title is actually grammatically incorrect so it doesn't really make sense :blob_no: So I'm planning on changing it. :blob_hmm_two:

Asking for Story Feedback https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/planning-to-revise-my-novel-please-give-feedback.1788/

No problem. I'm glad it helped. If you have the time I will also appreciate receiving a feedback for my novel. Here's the thread I made.

Title: Merge Riot! I'm planning to revise my novel. It may take some time but I would like to ask feedback on the following: Title - Is it confusing?Does it grab attention? Is it suitable for my novel? Synopsis - Is it interesting? Does it make sense? First Chapter - Does it make you want to...

That's the title? I'll make sure to watch that.

I'm not really an expert in writing but here are my thoughts: I couldn't really wrap my head around it since I don't know the title of the story and the chapter, maybe you can add it to make things clearer for us. The first line is good. I will not be able to consider it as an attention...

I think puns are really interesting for names of mob characters. For example, Hua Mei Xing sounds like Amazing. Or is it just me?

My MC is actually like this. She's not too stupid to function but her social skills are lacking. Also, her antics are mainly where her stupidity shows. Also, her intelligence is not really high. This is really helpful. To give a clearer idea on her antics, here's an excerpt from a chapter...

It's the second one. Since my novel is supposed to be a comedy.

She's a flower of evil. I guess I'll have to try making her a bit more likeable.

My novel has a stupid MC. It's supposed to be a novel where no characters give a fuck about anything. I just don't know how to write a character that's stupid yet not annoying. What are your thoughts? What is the right type of stupid for you? Personally, I prefer the smarter MCs but I wanted...