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  1. UndyingEmbers

    My first requested cover art in SH

    That looks amazing! I wish I had an awesome cover like that for my story as well. You're very talented! :)
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    When to reply to readers? And not be a ****?

    I usually try to respond to comments for my stories most of the time. I don't answer if it's something that would require me to reveal spoilers, and I try really hard to not engage in exchanging comments if someone posts something extremely negative. However, I always reply to people who are...
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    Which one is better?

    I like the first one. Wish I had the talent to draw a map for my story lol. Nice work!
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    Implemented Alert Preference: new Chapter

    I'd like to also request this feature. It'd be nice to know when I have chapters to read.
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    The Day You Became A Decent Writer

    This is the first story that I worked on. I've let the project stall a bit since I've been focused on my other work, but I really enjoyed this one and I'll probably go back to it sometime in the future. The story is called Breaker and here is the first chapter:
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    To all those authors who can write a chapter a day. I salute you.

    Usually I spend the early time in the mornings before my kids wake up to relax and write. I find that having quiet time helps me focus. A lot of times I'm thinking about where my story is going to go while I am going about my day, so when I find a little time to write, it's just a matter of...
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    The reason/or inspration behind one of your proudest works?

    For my latest story, The Necromancer and the Would-Be-Hero, the inspiration was that I wanted to create a villain story that had deep characters. What is it exactly that made her turn into the person she is? What are her motivations? Why does she decide to take on a sentient familiar rather than...
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    To all readers who just reads one chapter then bookmark/add to reading list. What are you waiting for?

    I honestly wonder about this too... I look at my stories and never know if people just read one chapter bookmark it and decide they didn't like it, or if they're saving up. As a reader, I usually bookmark something I'm interested in after reading the first chapter and then over a few days I try...
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    Writing How to go about MultiProtag?

    The way I see it is that there are a few reasons to have mutli-protag and to do different POV, but either way, I highly encourage the style of switching by chapter if possible. The way I use it, and I'm far from an expert, is to show protagonists who are far apart, show a different person's...
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    Hoping for some feedback on a one-off I wrote.

    I see. That's pretty interesting. You could probably just rewrite that last part to make it clearer somehow. Overall, if you do write more, I'll be sure to check it out. ^_^
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    Hoping for some feedback on a one-off I wrote.

    I think it's well written and could be interested. There was some repetitiveness that I felt while reading through it and I'm not sure how I feel about his eyes constantly changing colors, but maybe that'd be explained later on. The thing I was most confused about is that he says he cannot turn...
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    Looking for help with my story's description

    Thank you so much for the detailed advice! It really makes a huge difference to see that short and sweet is better than a long detailed description that gives away the whole prologue. I hadn't been sure on how to approach this without giving any major spoilers, but this style of synopsis looks...
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    Feedback for my BL story~?

    I read the prologue and although I have never read a cultivation story, I can say that I found the story to be very well written and interesting. Your grammar is great and I like the style that you use to make up your paragraphs. Keep up the awesome work! I'm sure that I'll keep reading!
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    Looking for help with my story's description

    Hi, everyone! I started a new story recently, and I'm really struggling with coming up with a good description it. The primary genres are isekai and fantasy. I'm hoping that some of you might be able to read the first chapter as well as the blurb that I have come up with so far in order to help...
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    Just want some feedback on my first chaper

    I thought I'd throw my two cents in here in hopes that you will continue to try and not give up on writing your story. First, the positive is that there is some potential for an interesting Isekai story here. Ian is taken to another world and has his powers awakened, and he will go on a...
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    Just Need Some Feedback, Any Thoughts Are Nice.

    I read your first chapter, and it looks like an interesting story to me. I have a couple pieces of feedback for you, that hopefully will help you out. There are some minor grammatical things and some confusing wording in that first chapter. For example, try to avoid using and twice within a...
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    Looking to get some feedback on my story

    Good suggestion. I'll number the chapters as well as give them titles. :)
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    Looking to get some feedback on my story

    Thanks for the feedback. I think that I have a hard time with the pacing in this one. It makes sense that Lily would probably need to be dragged away from her cartoons since she was so excited about it. I should work on making her emotions a little stronger. I used to have a prologue that...
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    New version of my story needs some feedbacks

    I read the prologue and the first chapter. The premise of the story is good. It is always more interesting to me when a character isn't thrilled to be zapped off into another world. The quality of your writing improved vastly over the two chapters. One thing that I could offer a small amount of...
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    Looking to get some feedback on my story

    Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I'll try to work on making smoother scene transitions and try to keep up a consistent level of detail.
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