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  1. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Thank you my friend, this helped immensely. Do you mind if I run any names or phrases past you in the future, should any ideas strike? And once more, thank you for entertaining a novice.
  2. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Just an "Apparatus" in Russian. If you can suggest any alternatives, I would be more than happy to use it. And I think Ivan is a shortening of Ivanov, but i am not certain how that flows from region to region. If Ivan is a shortening, i might include the -nov in the full name, but i am not certain.
  3. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Say, as a Russian, is the name "Ivan Geroiovich Apparata" a logical name for an AI machine fathered by Geroi? The three names thing is kind of confusing, and I hope i did not accidentaly feminize the names.
  4. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Well friend, feel free to poke holes in this drivel i spewed. As told, I am working on a setting invented by a black author, mangled by a polish company that got strong-armed by a half-Canadian, half-Chinese actor born in Lebanon to try and wrangle a fun fic out of it. I find the story and...
  5. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Im sorry for being obtuse. In cyberpunk lore, in 2020, a global AI revolt happened that crashed the internet as it was at that time, and humanity lost quite a number of cities and factories to suddenly rogue AI´s. AI´s are rightfully a very suspicious tech, especially since none of the "old"...
  6. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Cyberpunk is a strange setting that had nationalities itself usurped mostly by the readily available translation tech. Now Cyberpunk America is a special hellhole in itself with the wiki claiming there are ten national languages minimum besides English due to immigration. Hence I tried my Soviet...
  7. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Well, Eastern Euros in that world are under Soviets.
  8. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    I was tempted, from the moment the trailer dropped. And I purposefully steered clear just not to poison my view with hot cybernetic ballerinas, lest I fall.
  9. Shaky

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    I am writing a fanfic about cyberpunk 2077 from the perspective of a Neo-Soviet AI going rogue/malfunctioning in America. I would love feedback on everything: The intro description (it seems wonky but I don't know how), grammar (I think I have a habit of repeating words+the eternal mistake of...
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