There are plenty of CN urban rebirth stories using real people's names, like Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, Shigeru Miyamoto, etc, and that seems fine.
The authors weren't get sued or anything.
I'm disappointed you didn't add any loli character...
You mentioned that your story is in a sci-fi fantasy world.
I think a world building chapter would be a good choice too. Perhaps, discussing more about the technology tree in that world.
Was there are floating car or ship? If yes, what is...
Where is your story?
I searched from your account on the main website and found nothing written.
I looked at your twitter link and the twitter says this account doesn't exist.
FYI, you can use SH forum to host your image, by uploading them as attachment to one of your post.
For alternative, you can also create a blogger / wordpress account, just to use it for hosting your img.
Yes, I used the table, with the total width set to 880px, not percentage.
If you use PX on the table width, its size will be same whether you see it from the desktop or the mobile.
If you want the details, you can see it yourself by viewing the page source.
I see, thank you for your opinion.
There was no complicated reason for my writing style. At that time I wanted to bloat the word count for adventum contest,
and then it ended up that way.
IMO, that depends on your narration. If you use fabulous wordings, describe character expressions, exaggerations, etc. Even ordinary routine tasks can be entertaining to read.
Let's see, for example:
🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾 🐺
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Damn... I just realized symbol, emoji, and custom font suddenly turned into question mark.
Before it was like this:
But now, it become this:
Tony, fix please....
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SYeeet.... I used a lot of emoji like (💎) (🔍) and many more.
Now all of...
Rather than just the author, I think it would be better to make everyone to make a judgement of a review, like wuxiaworld has done.
Agree or Disagree, and then allowed to say something in the comments.