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Your chosen name reminds me of my novel Blue Rose. What a coincidence!

Take it a bit slower and take care, Simple! There are points of no return when it comes to worsening your health and it would be a pity to lose the writing skill of someone like you.

Ever tried painting?

I'll recommend works of mrsimple. They are absolutely beautiful.

What genre do you read?

Frankly speaking, I'm not at all a critic. I only read literary works where I like the general ambience and the characters are drawn in such a way that I can have a glimpse of their inner world. I liked the way you described things.

I had a look at the prologue and the first chapter and they looked quite promising. I'll read the rest when I can manage some time. You're planning a re-write? Why? It was already pretty good. I was hooked to your description of birth... Such a mature style of writing isn't seen here often.

I thought so, friend. It gave the sentence a poetic touch.

Please improve the formatting of your paragraphs first. Did you use the word 'unbeknownst'? It appears to be a rather uncommon choice of vocabulary. It's only one small chapter, so it's still too early to comment on style, plot and chara development. Just keep on writing and posting~

Updated: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/27825/blue-rose/

Posted a new chapter. I'm enjoying writing this one~

That's the marriage of the year!