Situation goes like this. Guy finds girl Id and states her name. I'll be writing her nickname for the rest of the story, but we don't know the nickname yet. Should I start by calling her by the ID name then transition when she states her nickname.
Also it's not a situation where she can just go...
Idk what else to say. It's a sci-fi show inspired by cowboy bebop. It's called the Black Bazaar Blues. It's episodic. Um I've been working on it for a while and I'm releasing it monthly to apply pressure on myself lol.
All types of critique are welcome. Don't like it? Why. Grammar issues, I'd...
Anyone have any experience putting a flashback into their chapters? Do you cut, have to literally state it a flashback. I established that the character is younger and different looking but it still reads werid to me.
This one been in my head for a while, but I haven't been on any forums recently so here we go.
A character is camping in the forest when bigfoot comes and speaks, but he says something you would never suspect him to say.