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  1. Anon_Y_Mousse

    So I tried out a new writing style. Thoughts?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468068/unhinged--dwellers-of-the-deepa-deep-sea-monster-evolution-litrpg/ (You can read any chapter, except for the April Fool's one for this feedback. They're 1.5k-2k words long, shouldn't take long) So basically, I wrote my first story in a more omniscient...
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    Writing Prompt Write about a piece of modern technology but, make it sound like a cosmic horror

    So the premise is you're trying to describe a piece of modern tech to some person in a fantasy world, except you want to scare the shit out of 'em. The description can be as long or short as you want, just try to describe one relatively modern invention as eldritch and cryptic as you can.(i.e...
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    What motto sounds the best for a system of weaponized stars?

    It isn't really important for the xianxia-sci-fi story I'm writing, but I just thought it would be cool to have a motto for a literal weaponized star, kinda like irl ships. Though I'm indecisive in which sounds the best, so I'll let random people on the internet decide.
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    Describe your story using only hentai tags

    Or someone else's, if you want.
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    What do you feel about rapeblossoms?

    These things...
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    Writing Prompt What if an intergalactic empire makes a fantasy world, just cause they can)

    Welcome to another one of my writing prompts: a place where I come to totally not steal other people's ideas. Do sci-fi writers even exist on the forum? So basically, a k2-k3 civilization decides that fantasy novels and hyperrealistic simulations in Matrioshka brains aren't enough and they...
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    Authors who wrote stories that have a low rating, how do you feel about it?

    Can be from any platform. I'm sure some of us have those reviews that rate our stories pretty badly. Sometimes its bullshit but others actually make a good point about what it's lacking in. I've seen some stories with <4, and there's some written reviews saying it's because of the story going...
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    Everyone on earth suddenly gets a system, except it's the 1400s

    So you know how in some settings stuff happens on earth, aliens come out of portals or some shit and then suddenly there's a LitRPG system for humanity to fight back? I actually don't recall any stories like that, but anyways. What if that happened, but it's in the 1400s? Standard LitRPG system...
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    Nothing I write ever satisfies me anymore...

    I know it's almost the end of the year and I shouldn't be having these thoughts. But, I just really wanna vent about this to other writers. Yeah, exactly what it says, I'm satisfied with the ideas and the plot I've outlined, but I always end up dissatisfied whenever I create a chapter. Due to...
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    Magical Torture Methods

    Can be as gory or comedic as you want(put in spoiler if you think it's nsfw) use any magic system as a basis for this. I'll give my thoughts and a rating for each one based on how creative it is(i.e not just "I snap my fingers and cause soul pain" xianxia type bullshit but actually using a magic...
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    Authors who chose a name with a particular meaning for their MC/s, what is it and why?

    I'm asking this question to authors who intentionally chose a name with a specific meaning for their MC, whether it plays some role in their personality/background/future actions. Just curious. Don't have to answer if it's too much of a spoiler. Might make a seperate thread for side characters.
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    "Anti"-Redo of healer?

    Not tryna throw shade on redo of healer, just felt like the best way to describe what I'm looking form Just wondering, is there a story where the MC's past life has been all about revenge on their enemies and humiliating them in the worst way possible but in the end they regret it and decide to...
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    Isekai within Isekai (story idea/Looking for)

    Although this is in author general this isn't necessarily purely for authors. Partially because I am looking for stories with this premise and partially because I want someone else to pick up this idea and try to write it since I probably never will. So, what if someone were to...
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    Characters/Events/Items in your stories that reference Mythology/History

    Just curious, I mean most of us probably have an element of history/myth in our stories without intending to due to the nature of writing. But was there ever an element in your story that you decided to base on an interesting piece you've read or one you've decided to research on?
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    Thoughts on my description for a LitRPG-esque story

    So before anyone redirects me, may the synopsis thread rest in peace, it had a good run. So unfortunately, I'd have to post my synopsis here instead of there. As much as I want to revive it, I'm not confident in my ability to rate other's works. Anyways: Here's the actual description. I'll...
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    Recommendations Stories with MC working a mundane job(preferably fantasy)

    Like a receptionist, bartender, gardener etc. And I don't mean stories where the MC is mentioned to be a janitor at one point but 90% of the story is just them assassinating people or something. The mundane job has to have some sort of significance to the plot. Also no restaurants or internet...
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    How hard would a power system like this scale?

    Alright, so basically I'm thinking of a litRPG-esque system wherein stats go from 1 to 12. It's gonna be an exponential increase, so for example a 6 would 8x as strong as a 3. For simplicity's sake, I'll keep the question solely to a "strength" stat, which will determine how heavy a certain...
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    litRPG authors, how in-depth do you go on your system?

    (I remember a thread like this but I couldn't find it) I don't mean on the chapters themselves, I mean on your writing process as a whole. Do you have a spreadsheet to keep track of stats? Do you know exactly how much these stats provide? Do you have a formula to calculate XP gain and other...
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    What do you consider enough for a rewrite?

    So, 90k words into my web serial and I've been feeling like rewriting it because the magic system had a plothole that I've created through the latest chapters. Anyways, I'm not gonna ask for feedback on that since I doubt anyone who sees this has read my story or cares. So instead, I'll ask...
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    What are some comedic lines that can also work with a serious scene?

    Basically what it says in the title. Comedic lines that can be funny but when said in a serious/dramatic scene can also hit hard. For me one would be "This and that are different!"
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