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The only thing I hate about prologues here is how they throw off your entire chapter count. Like there’s no actual “chapter 0,” it’s just your prologue masquerading as chapter 1. Same issue with translations too, you think a completed novel has 140 chapters and you only see 139 but actually it’s...

Definitely more fanfic than original fics. See, I have a lot of ideas for original stories but it takes work just to bring readers into the same world with me since they don’t have it preassembled in their heads. With fanfic there’s that thread of common knowledge that helps you and the reader...

Houshin Engi by Fujisaki Ryu has already been adapted twice and both times badly and/or weirdly off the original plot with horrible pacing/edit issues. Please give it the 100+ episode saga it deserves because it’s pretty epic on its own grounds!!

"Error establishing a database connection" Still down here, right when I was about to update too lol

Hmm okay, here's a list of books comfortably in the 700s range. I'll link to the GoodReads page so you can see other people's reviews on them. Keep in mind that most of these are written for teens/tweens but again, you're focusing on English levels not age levels so check them out: FANTASY The...

Female cultivator MC…I tried one once (also no romance) before putting it on hiatus and it definitely got less views than the BL or BG story I wrote, but it has its niche. Generally speaking I’d say make sure something about it is solid, whether it’s plot, action, worldbuilding, humor etc, since...

Hey there. I wasn’t born in an English speaking country but I started in elementary school in the U.S. and I can tell you now that the easiest and most pain-free way to improve English is to read. Read books and stories you enjoy and love, and keep at them. I don’t mean webnovels (it’s hard to...

Man I don’t know much about original novels with villain protags… But if you wanna dip into manhwa, The Priest of Corruption is technically an antihero who serves his morally-gray goddess, Regressor Instruction Manual has an unrepetantly manipulative bastard who uses everyone (warnings for...

whoa you uploaded all the chapters at once? ?? good job on writing so much but you'll probably get more views if you space out upload times, just as a general tip. also, consider joining BL Palace's discord if you're into BL, a bunch of us hang out there lol~ ok onto the actual feedback...

modernverse with uhhh gates and dungeons setup. should be fine as long as i stay out of the way when the actual protagonists fight.

You have good content but you can break it up more. It's like cooking—just heating up chicken makes it edible, but you need flavoring and garnishes to make it palatable. One tip I'll leave is to check your sentence lengths. Most of them seem to be either the same length or very long, filling in...

alice has been lovely since NUF days! but also omnipresent and inescapable. watch what you say. she's reading over your shoulder right now. a-alice, u'll be nice to us right :blob_shock:

ooh this is like an ARG! if you get stuck you should have their reddit have a go at it >:D

Ok. Then you might benefit from taking some time to worldbuild a bit. Conflicts irl are rarely solved clean and neatly in one sweep. Even if you've taken care of the danger/issue right away, there will still be aftereffects to deal with. Like say....lemme make something up: Say your MC is a...

someone used this as the OP of their fanmade series on bilibili and it's been stuck in my head for a week cute and catchy but the lyrics are sad? heck yeah, count me in.

interesting. is the conflict so straightforward that you can solve it within ten chapters? then maybe instead of writing a book just about the conflict, you can branch off into your characters' lives instead and have those make up the four volumes?

if it's a webnovel i'm reading online in English, i would prefer to have the foreign language show up with some obvious symbols like brackets or whatever. because ultimately, the important thing is the story and how relevant that dialogue is to the plot, not how cool some language the author...

OP, im reading your post and let me know if i parse this right: you have an interesting conflict/problem that you think would make for a good story, but you need more details so it goes beyond just that "conflict/problem" idea, right? all i know is that bigger conflicts usually cause a ripple...

i'm guessing you're talking general interactions, cause the top/bottom question will be answered obviously enough if they go R18. just character dynamics will do. it's easy to say "he's top b/c he makes the final choices" or "he's bottom b/c he's a crybaby" blahblah but things aren't always so...

idk what you want to do but surprise reader expectations use unreliable narrators, that's my favorite uh MC thinks he and ML are cool bros and narrates their adventures together like some typical shounen action series until boom we switch to ML's POV one chapter and it's all shoujo and sparkles...