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Was that "professional editor" The novel ninja? Don't listen to him. He is a stupid fucking twat. Ever notice that none of his own writing is published on the site or even linked to his name? Its because he wont back up his words with his writing. He is incompetent and doesnt know what the fuck...

patreon is the best platform and theyre based

Stephen kings biography on repeat

"I want this feature" "here is this feature" "this feature is too much work I don't want this feature"

Cook it and make it advanced too

My reactions: I won't give proscriptive feedback. That said, if I were to write this, I would start with the character in the room and the clock at 30 or 15 or something. I would use dialogue to write that entire first half of the chapter, the character explaining how they got there, maybe to...

A big part of how the audience perceives your characters is how other characters react to them. Like Jason Asano from HWFWM. The MC really isn't smart at all, but he seems like it for a while because of how everyone in all these scenes says "wow he is really smart."

its because its very easy to write exposition as the MC exploring the system or it being explained. There are tons of examples of litrpg where the MC knows the system, some more recent ones being Blessed Time(CoCo_P) and Kairos(void herald) I'm currently reading an eastern novel called the world...

I'm going to write one where its from the POV of a civilization that has just been invaded and are being rapidly accelerated in technology. Like theyre medieval but a fantasy race conquered them to run a train line thru

Almost all my stories are fantasy pre industrial

Pre industrial, Sengoku Jidai, Mongol Khanates Height, Final years of Rome Height of Ottoman Empire Meiji and Taisho periods

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The intrigue built up in the auditorium and wonder what is going on is A+. The comedy is good with the evaluation of the characters net worth. As is the characterization with revealing how little he owned. Almost DNF at the fight scene. Would have DNF there if it wasn't from this thread...

Would not read. Pros: good imagery in some areas, sympathy for main character, conflict driving scenes. Cons: Obvious mishaps with English, using the wrong words in some places, strange syntax and grammar, stilted dialogue. Could be vastly improved with some line editing.