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  1. KingMusa

    The Ranking Exams are heating up!!!

    Come check out my magic.battle academy story!! If your are looking for a story to past time with, a story that'll entertain you. Or if you just like Magic Academy stories, come check out my work! It currently has 23 chapters, and each chapter is less then 2000 words. Easy to get through and a...
  2. KingMusa

    How do i write science fiction!!?

    Yup currently going through a few sci-fi wiki's right now I'll just let people know I don't know what I'm talking about I'm the synopsis.
  3. KingMusa

    How do i write science fiction!!?

    I'll go with ignoring the nerds. Thank You. I'm 23, I've had one of those in high school but unfortunately never really read it unless I was in class. But thank you! I'm skilled at writing Fantasy, so your advice helps. I will do so! This seems to be the advice everyone is giving. Thank...
  4. KingMusa

    How do i write science fiction!!?

    Hellooooo civilians of Scribblehub!! I want to write a sci-fi story but the problem is.... I'm not a science person, I barely passed any of my science class. My knowledge in science is on the basics. So I'm here asking for help! I've watched many sci-fi series like Voltron, Gundam Iron Blood...
  5. KingMusa

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    Thank you for your 2 cent. It really helped
  6. KingMusa

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    Thank You for the Advice!! I understand what your saying, and ill be sure to take keep it in mind when writing my next setting
  7. KingMusa

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    Thanks a lot, this really helped. If I'm understanding correctly, I should use narration to give an outline of the city, then use what the characters, see and hear, or even feel, to describe the relevant details in dialogue or character action. Thank You! Thank You, your explanation helped...
  8. KingMusa

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    No your answered really helped, I now have some kinda of check list of tick off. Thank You!
  9. KingMusa

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    Hello Citizen of Scribblehub! Can I please get some help on how to describe cities and kingdoms, examples would be great! Here are some descriptions of already written:(Dont mind the grammar please) 1.The train tracks were now on a tall bridge, stretching over the clear blue ocean that...
  10. KingMusa

    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Thank for taking the time to review my story!! From the feedbacks I've gotten from these threads, one think all my feedbacks have in common is my tense changing. I'll do more study on it and see what I can do. Thank you for the feedback!
  11. KingMusa

    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Take a look at my work! It's a magic Academy story. Here is the synopsis: Eleanora’s Academy of Magicka, crowned as the best institute on the continent of Elenora, is a prestigious magic academy for young wizards alike, to come and pit their magic and might against one another, in the...
  12. KingMusa

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Yes I've already struggled with past and present tense, so at one point of my writing carrying I think I might of unconsciously kinda stopped caring. Also this story was first written in first person so I guess that didn't really help it. Yes, I use a thesaurus while I write. I use to get a...
  13. KingMusa

    Do you like Magic Academy stories? Than look no futher!

    Then go check out my story!!! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/941113/elenoras-academy-of-magicka-ken-granfold/ That's Great! You should check out my story while your at it https://www.scribblehub.com/series/941113/elenoras-academy-of-magicka-ken-granfold/
  14. KingMusa

    Do you like Magic Academy stories? Than look no futher!

    I just dropped the newest chapter of Elenora's Academy of Magicka: Ken Granfold. Go check it out, it currently has 10 chapters, and each chapter is under 1,600 words, so they are fast paced and quick to get through. Here is the synopsis: Eleanora’s Academy of Magicka, crowned as the best...
  15. KingMusa

    first chapter feedback

    Check out my first chapter!Elenora's Academy of Magicka: Ken Granfold
  16. KingMusa

    Review swap (5/5) first 5 chapters [closed]

    I'm interested!
  17. KingMusa

    Citizens of ScribbleHub, come WITNESS and JUDGE MY RE-WRITTEN STORY

    So I'm rewriting my most successful story up to date, and I would really love some feedback so I can see if I have improved and where I can continue improving. Like always constructive feedback is what helps me most, I'm still perfecring my writing skills, so all feed back are wanted! It...
  18. KingMusa

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Not sure if you remember Wise Chicken, but you've given feed back another anither story of mine before. I'm here with a different story, it's a rewriting of my most successful story and i'd like your opinion on it. It currently only jas 9 chapters and each chapter is below 1,600 words, so...
  19. KingMusa

    Writing How to write a Mute Character

    Thank you all for the feedback!! Each was very useful, I'll take it all in and craft something that works best for me! Thank you again!
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