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Hello and welcome to me shamelessly asking for criticisms of my new story, Meet Luna, my Daughter. It is a simple story with little plot twists and contrivances as it is meant to revolve around the lives of Luna and Aster. I always feel the chapters are missing something, a sentimentality that...

"The idea of time travel, fantasy. The idea of transferring ourselves through time in any sort of way is nigh. Even less so that we can control where we would land, that would be up to fate. Even then what is to say the world is worth changing? What does changing the world do? You wouldn’t be...

Not looking to empose on my usual beta reader, who is studying for exams; however, I'm still curious for what I did wrong. The story is, This Story includes a Depressed Main Character. Summary: I’m already dead, and the story hasn’t even started. Thanks to anyone who offers feedback or even...