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  1. RedHunter2296

    Can u use one chapter entirely for supportive character??

    Yes, of course, as an author, it's important to know when to give importance to others, not just the protagonist. It's something that can greatly enrich a story, to see what their background is, their way of thinking, how they interact when the protagonist isn't around. It can easily make for...
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    Looking for feedback on the remake of my first chapter.

    Hello, I recently rewrote the first chapter of my novel due to several strong complaints that the first chapters of my novel are a disaster, even though the story as a whole is excellent. So, in an effort to improve, I am restructuring the first chapters in a very different way. Although they...
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    Want Me To Look at Your Work?

    Yes, of course, if you want you can write to me on Discord since it's easier for me to review it. My Discord username is indecipherable so make sure to note it down properly, it is: redhunter2296. :blob_shade:
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    Writing Writing: I need help, serious help with the prologue of my novel.

    Well, yeah, I know the beginning is where most readers get lost, that's always a given. What stresses me out is that both the one who gave up and wrote a super long hate comment about my story, as well as the most loyal reader who's up to date with the 200 chapters and comments "thank you" on...
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    Want Me To Look at Your Work?

    This is exactly what I was looking for, honestly it would be great for me, I really need help desperately right now. My novel is quite long, 260 chapters, but the real problem lies in the first 20, where I've received comments that they are very confusing, tedious, and too much happens, so the...
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    Writing Writing: I need help, serious help with the prologue of my novel.

    Hello everyone, This time I come to ask for help because I have a problem that I have been struggling with for a long time and I want to fix it, but the problem is that no matter what I try, I just don't know how to fix it. Valkyria Squadron My novel currently has 260 chapters, it's quite...
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    Give me your Top 5 Heartbreaking OSTs

    I don't have time right now to make a list, but I'll leave one that marked me for life. The context is great, but the challenge of the game was just to solve a Sudoku in three minutes. The real challenge was to see the Sudoku despite not being able to see through so many tears on the screen.
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    What is a silly thing you have looked up for your writing?

    A manual to operate, the pilote flight manual a F/A-18 super Hornet alongside the emergency landing protocols, on PDF. Was for a chapter of a air Battle with modern aircrafts, and I wanted to sounds realistic despite being a regular Ace Combat big boss mission
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    Forgotten Title MC Finds himself in WW2 Japan and in the Yamato.

    The problem with the WW2 battleship Yamato, is that it doesn't see to much action, outside midway, where was too far to protect the aircraft carriers lost, and his last one, where the idea was kill themselves trying to go and sunk with whatever enemy they could. Was a Meme even inside the...
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    I would say that never aim for a set numbers of words, just write until you feel your got to the natural end of that chapter, whatever are just 1.5 lk words, or 8k. Because if you have a set number, and you pass ir, you will have to chopped to fit in , or if you don't reach that number you will...
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    AI is going to revolutionize authors capabilities to create trailers and scenes

    I am a little more less hopeful about AI. Despite I myself used to create illustrations of the characters or show where the action is having place. Despite good results give, or whatever is the good or bad moral thing to do, I don't think is going to revolutionary as some people will think is...
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    I have been finally poached.

    Worse, they are Webnovel contractors. Webnovel pays them $100 to A&D Entertainment to find new novels for their site. they contact you and offer to pay you 30 dollars for your novel and their copyright in perpetuity. They keep the $70 profit while you have to work every day for the rest of...
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    I have been finally poached.

    Oh, I think this thread and mine are basically identical, so I'll try to summarize my contribution here as much as possible. Basically, after working my butt off all over the internet getting my story out there, they come offering me a 50%-50% deal where they just have to slap their name on top...
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    Asking for tips on making slow-pacing interesting

    I think at this point this would be a Necropost, but I'm going to give my advice anyway. The most important part of any story is CHARACTERS, even before the story or plot itself, the most important thing is characters. With them, you can make the fastest action story in the world still feel...
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    Non-exclusive sign A&D Entertainment And Webnovel, here we go again.

    Today's story is one known to everyone on the page, but whether to join us to laugh or cry for a while. Today, a certain Emma from AnD Entertainment sent me an email trying to contact me for a non-exclusive sign for the Webnovel platform and all its associates. Then comes a long message...
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    Attention Writers: Free Anime Style Novel Covers/ Illustrations Available!"

    Interesting, although since IA became popular, I have started to make illustrations of the characters in my novel, However there is a crucial scene and there is no way that a simple AI can do something even close to what I have in mind, so I would like to ask for help to do it. My novel is...
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    Just took me 25 years...

    Good to see you here doing your big step as a writer, let other people read it what you have done. Yeah, I know that feeling of happiness and intrigue the week I get out my novel too, was like a whole month that feel more alive than ever, and also write like crazy just out of that feeling...
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    Thoughts on "unwanted" feedback

    On my case, depends on how they are giving me feedback. Since English is not my first language, is normal that I have gramatical mistake here and there, some times people comment things like: this word should be this one, this other should be written on past in this way, feedback like that is...
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    I have created a trailer for my novel Valkyria Squadron, what do you think?

    Hello everyone again I've spent a few days trying to find new ways to promote my novel, and among them was to create a video, so here it is. Tell me, what do you think of it? Is it interesting? do you understand a bit of the plot? It has been an interesting project with a lot of...
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    Personal Rant: Ungrateful Audience

    Hello everyone I haven't commented here in a long time and I'm sorry that this is the topic I'm coming back with, but I can't take it anymore. So here I go with a personal anger I have and want to get off my chest. First of all, I know that this is not always the case and I really have very...
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