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  1. ModernGold7ne

    How Do You Write A ‘Normal’ Story?

    Well, to convey a clear goal and purpose, you need to focus on clarity. However, there's no such thing as normal. Every authors' has their voice, and that dictates the way they write. For a story to be considered normal, it has to be dull. Unless you're writing a college essay, you shouldn't...
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    Gentleman, it's quite astounding that he's so advanced, he climbs up and down the sofa. And...

    Gentleman, it's quite astounding that he's so advanced, he climbs up and down the sofa. And calls the name of whoever he wants to play with him, or pick him up. Oh, I'm boasting, apologies, I'll stop right there.
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    The nine month old baby in the house is already saying names, and walking without a crutch...

    The nine month old baby in the house is already saying names, and walking without a crutch. (Likes going fast.)
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    Just lightly edited all my current chapters over on royalroad. Took my afternoon, no more...

    Just lightly edited all my current chapters over on royalroad. Took my afternoon, no more writing or editing for today. I'll copy and paste to scribblehub later, when my mental fatigue is gone.
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    The only complain I got from my royalroad reviews was the overusage of he/she in chapter four, and chapter six, current chapters are all first drafts, I plan to rewrite them when I'm done with volume one. Thanks for the feedback, didn't realise chapter eight had so many run on sentences, your...
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    Editing Anybody want to judge my new sypnosis?

    You're overthinking, never said you said anything, but thanks for taking the time to give feedback.
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    When you write an outline, how much detail do you go into?

    Yeah, though in my case, character establishment was prioritized in my first 12 chapters.
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    Was bored, so on impulse decided to launch a discord server for my story Anima Aliena.

    Was bored, so on impulse decided to launch a discord server for my story Anima Aliena.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Only chapter one is like that, but I understand the differences in preference. Style was never a priority for me, I write for fun as a hobby, and decided to allow other people to enjoy my work. I doubt that I'll ever try to publish this, especially because I see it as challenge to beat. Like...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    I wasn't trying to be egotistical when I chose to distinguish the cores of the universe from the normal using colours. Why colours? Their flexibility makes them a good tool for expression. The universe while in the story is not part of it, meaning that I can't afford to integrate it too well...
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    How well can you take criticism?

    Sorry but I can't stomach boy love, or girl love.
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    How well can you take criticism?

    My experience differs, the amount of 0.5s I've got on royalroad is astounding though ineffective due to an abundance of positive reviews/ratings. The funniest part is, I've got more reads per chapter than people following my story over there. Why? I haven't yet passed the binge worthy 100...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Interesting, could you please give mine a shot. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/anima-aliena/
  14. ModernGold7ne

    What songs are you listening to?

    Nightcore.
  15. ModernGold7ne

    What Good Thing Happened Today?

    Got another great review over on royalroad, my story is on the verge of qualifying for best-rated, people on this forum made me laugh, drank handmade natural juice. (Passionfruit, and lime.)
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    How well can you take criticism?

    Congratulations, I'm officially confused.
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    I am already aware.

    I am already aware.
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    Smiling cause, I'm so happy.

    Smiling cause, I'm so happy.
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    Great Offline Games Right Now?

    Chromes' dino game is a respectable legend.
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    How well can you take criticism?

    Somewhat relatable, like I find it easier to ignore 0.5 ratings on royalroad because of the many positive reviews that enforced that my story is doing well,
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