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  1. ModernGold7ne

    How well can you take criticism?

    I eat that stuff like I eat dry rice, by reading it while drinking a soda. Bonus I don't mind criticism because it helps me know if something is wrong.
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    A photo cropping feature.

    It's a hassle to set a book cover, you won't know how it looks when accepted, and implemented, until it's actually accepted. With photo cropping, it'll at least be possible to make sure the cover fits properly. This request is due to my experience,
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    Editing Anybody want to judge my new sypnosis?

    Old A universe inspired by those who destroyed themselves searched for something, anything that could stave off its boredom. In its quest, it stumbled upon the domain of souls. For its pursuits, it surveyed their memories. For its own sake, it gave one an opportunity. ####### Join Andrew as he...
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    Anyone willing to give me some feedback?

    Exactly as asked above, I've got 15k words split between 12 chapters, I want to know if my story is actually developing well. I'm willing to reciprocate, if required. Edit: Not a litrpg, but a true high fantasy. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/anima-aliena/
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    What's so great about this?

    Guys, there's an unsolved mystery that has been bothering me, why does so many people like my third chapter? It's always one digit higher than first and second. So, ignoring the above, what's your most liked chapter?
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    Difference in attitude.

    Over on royal road, I'm more of a business person than anything else, the community isn't terrible per se, but from my perspective, their forum is boring. I view it as nothing more than a preferred option to web novel. Scribble hub on the other hand, well I'm a casual here. The forum is...
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    Salt or sugar?

    When you fry flour dough, do you give it sugar or salt? Also what do your call it?
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    Ever happened to you?

    Ever wrote a paragraph with pure intentions then realised it was all innuendo when you read it?
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    What is your opinion on this?

    Skip to relevant; this is the original post. I want to use the word 'they' as something derogatory, for my universe I want to twist it into meaning, incapable, impotent, genderless. Example A prostitute advertising herself walks into a bar filled with men, she asks a random man, "Wanna...
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    How often do you guys take breaks?

    When writing I normally take a break after 500 or 600 words though if I'm suffering from a block, a week is enough to restore my creative juices.
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    Editing What pronouns would you use in this situation?

    In my story, I have a character whose hiding their gender, I refer to them as he/she, I try to limit my usage of those pronouns but it can be quite arduous. I'm fine with it since it doesn't actually interfere with my reading but some of my readers aren't. They/their is highly recommended...
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    What's your motivation?

    If I'm being honest, I like reading what I write, but the truth is, I put my thoughts on paper because otherwise they won't let me sleep. Guess I'm just hunted.
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    Writing Prompt Honesty of water

    Here's a challenge; Make a poem using the title's theme. As per custom, I go first. When mother sky is at peace with no clouds to show, Aunty sea is kind and gently touches my shore, And when mother sky is asleep, Aunty sea helps carry her stars, Whenever it's a stormy day, Aunty sea...
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    Does anyone secretly pay homage to their previous work?

    You saw the question, and yes I do. Characters like Tavis and the protagonist are based off a lost draft. The Zurr and having Universum Inspiratum also refer to itself as the system, that's just me paying respect, to myself. Disclaimer: I am not narcissistic.
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    Would it be possible?

    Do you think it'd be possible to explain to a human from ten thousand years ago that our everyday items aren't the outcome of magic? And if for some reason, your answer is yes, would our so called magic become science in their eyes?
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    What would you consider slice of life?

    I'm slightly curious, what makes slice of life what it is? Would a story whose pace moves day by day be qualified as slice of life? My high fantasy has me asking questions.
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    Writing Anyone want to try something new?

    For those like me who've ever written in third person, let's see who's bold enough to try first person. As customs dictate; I die first. There were too many people on the bus today, I've never been one to be fond of crowds, but I guess today is one of those days. That man, the guy wearing white...
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    Am I the only one?

    Anybody else give one site more love over the other, like I mean giving the chapters you post elsewhere more attention because of the majority of your actual readers being there. Also, lack of feedback over here, so care less.
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    Describe your story using only genres and tags.

    You read the title of the thread. Per custom I'll go first. Anima Aliena; A gender-bender action-adventure revolving around psychology and high fantasy with a non-human protagonist.
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    DragonBall Fanfilm coming soon

    It's coming, oh its coming, I can't wait.
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