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  1. Sairren

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    The feedback is appreciated. As for the typos happening, I expected them but they likely fell through the cracks when I was editing to fix a lot of other issues. Also, chapters 1 through 6 were edited much earlier than 7 through 17. 1 through 6 were done... around or just before winter of last...
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    Do you guys still cringe at your own older works when reading back at it?

    Considering what my novel started as, I very much do. But I do take some pride in that project, and am glad I did it. It was full on in-jokes and references, but it was that bit of fun that led me to want to rewrite all of it as a much better story.
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    Fair enough. Though genuinely surprised you read though to around the half-way point. The feedback is appreciated though. o wo)b
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    Dead Space 1-3 walkthrough is great for movie night

    I can't stand most horror. But Deadspace. I always find myself coming back and watching a movie version of it and watching/listening to lore videos related to it. Always a fun time to watch, though I do end up being a little on edge if I do it at night.
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    Username and Avatar

    I based "Sairren" off the pronunciation of my actual name since people had trouble saying a 5-letter name. Turns out people can't say this name the way it's intended 50% of the time. I would've changed it again, but I wanted to get used to hearing other people say something similar to my actual...
  6. Sairren

    Story Feedback. As Thank you

    Thank you for the opportunity. Any feedback would be appreciated, and hope things keep going well for you. o wo)b https://www.scribblehub.com/series/248695/drunks-amp-fanatics/
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Feel free to say what you like. My co-creator and I would be happy to see you be more blunt than a dwarf who's had a few too many drinks. o wo)b https://www.scribblehub.com/series/248695/drunks-amp-fanatics/
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    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    Would be glad to have the opinion of a grey blob on my story. It's ~80k words and the story is complete until I get to work on the second arc at some point in the near future. No romance or anything that you listed in your restrictions. o wo)b...
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    Finished editing my story a little while ago, so it's about as cleaned up as I can make it. Feel free to be as blunt as you like, but there's no smut in it. I'd say a fair amount of violence when it happens though. It is segmented into "parts" though because of how it was originally 30 chapters...
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    Free Constructive Review(closed)

    Got my story cleaned up recently. Feel free to leave as fair of a rating as you like with stars and such. If it's low, just helps me find issues that need fixing. o wo)b https://www.scribblehub.com/series/248695/drunks-amp-fanatics/
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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    I recently finished editing my story, so it's mostly done outside of any minor errors I may not have caught. It's in the signature. o wo)b
  12. Sairren

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I recently edited my entire novel to get it cleaned up. There are definitely still minor issues here and there, but it's in a much better state than it was when I first started posting chapters on a weekly basis. I do think I posted here some time last year, but I have gone and made changes to...
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    Finished Editing

    There may be minor details that require editing, such as a grammar fix, but it's pretty much done. I'll be getting to work on the second arc in a few months.
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    Finished Editing

    I finally went through all the chapters I had for my story and cleaned up as many of the details as I could. Any feedback on it would be appreciated, or just giving it a passing read would be great. Gonna have to work on planning out the next series of events and getting the little details...
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    Promote your story here!

    Just finished editing my story, so I've cleaned it up as best I personally can. MC tries to follow her dreams in a swords and sorcery world. Ends up getting knocked around multiple times, but comes out better than when she started. Though a lot of it is because her mentors are manipulating...
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    Do you plan a plot or just wing it?

    I open a Google Doc, type the chapter number and a title, then make a numbered list with sub-points that cover all the major points I need to cover. After that, if I have enough time, I do it again on a separate document to refine and see if it's all the points I want to cover, if there's...
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    First 5 chapters feedback exchange

    I have given your five chapters a read and am currently working on a review.
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    Are Review Swaps Allowed?

    Gave your first "chapter" a read, as well as posted a review for you. I'm not much of a reader, but I think that it does have potential. And I did think the main character was much younger than stated.
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    Post your male character and I'll tell you what I think of him from my female reader's perspective

    Might as well throw my hat into the ring. Name: Hei Zhao Visuals: Description: Best described as a golden apple rotten at the core, Hei uses his a silver tongue to charm and bewilder while wielding magic and blade to sever and destroy. Having lived as a hated existence for over 400 years...
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