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You can read my story. It is currently languishing away in obscurity, and probably for good reason, it may or may not suck. I'll drop a link below, check it out, if it's your cup of tea have at it. (The synopsis was badly written, so I'll tell you what it's about. Silas, a gifted son of mages...

I thought I was pretty old here, glad to see generally this isn't a forum dominated by teenagers. Phew.

Play football (soccer), used to play a lot when I was younger and through my teens. These days life has been getting in my way, but I still play sometimes during weekends.

You could be writing a story about God, and since God knows everything and your story is in 1st POV, voila, 1st POV omniscient.

I'm up to 30 followers now. Also, my dad came to visit me today.

Well, so you have an inner voice then. The voice that recites the words in your head, that is an inner voice. Some people can only do simple things with it, and are completely unaware it exits because it never interrupts anything else. Even as I am typing right now it feels like I'm talking with...

You calling me crazy?! Lmao. Jokes aside, it isn't really hallucinating. Like, if I'm imagining a scene I want to write, the process starts with voices, then the blank space is filled with imagery. On my best writing days, I hear the words, I don't see them. I can't imagine touch, but I can...

Shocking eh? Some people see words and nothing else, it is just words on a page. Others read out loud, after years they learn to control the volume of their voice to not be a nuisance to others, and then there are those that recite the words I'm their head.

Out loud or in your head?

When you read, do you recite the words in your head, or are they just words you see and know the meaning without hearing the word?

Funny thing is I read a fascinating story of a girl who thought she was crazy cause she kept hearing voices, but her psychiatrist later found out it was her inner voice. She developed it suddenly during her teenager years, before then her head was a quiet place. Now, it sounds normal to me, and...

I thought I did. The voice in your head your thoughts take. Some people actually can't form mental images. As for lacking an inner voice, you know when you're pissed at something and launch into a tirade in your head? A particular trait of people that lack an inner voice is that they voice...

I just found out something really interesting. Not everyone has an inner voice. I do, I always have and thought everyone else did too, but apparently I was wrong. There are varying degrees, and it sometimes goes beyond simply having an inner voice. Some people can't form mental images too. Some...

The good news for me is my story will never get pirated lol. Sorry man, it must suck having someone leech off your hardwork like that.

So Marc is playing the role of S because his girlfriend's an M? It's an autobiography isn't it?

From that time I got reincarnated as a slime, when Rimuru first committed mass genocide before becoming an awakened demon lord.

It really bums me out too, and I just got started. The issue with my story are obvious ones, it is a slow burner, and the point the story starts in might've given prospective readers that the starting point was much further along the MC's life. That said, about 2-4 of my readers actually read...

Thank you! Indeed I plan to rewrite, as this is my first serialized story. A lot of the issues you pointed out are some really interesting, fixing them should be fun. About the synopsis, I'm just terrible at it lol. That was the premise of the story when I started, and I selected tags to fit the...

It's long, I'm a couple months into writing it, still ongoing. I'm looking for not only feedback, but helpful tips on where I could improve the story. Since it's long you can't do line editing, but it would help if you could point out things you like and don't like about the style of writing...

Lol, 0. I have a 2k a week schedule and some days I bang out words on a Saturday when I am free, or I write randomly through the week the meet that 2k limit. Doesn't matter how I get there, as long as I get there.