The horsey is back and has a question. Over a year ago, I started a story called Rico Suave but I have had an idea to combine Rico with a character called Marvin and write Marvin’s story. Rico features heavily in Marvin’s story now because I worked the plot out. So should I just keep Rico Suave...
I posted my first story, and I want some feedback in the story comments, please?
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/281759-rico-suave/chapter/281760/
Tear it apart if you want, say it's good but be honest? Thank you.