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    Do you guys still cringe at your own older works when reading back at it?

    I cringe myself into a black hole, yes
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    Serial 5-starer

    I am not making fun of anyone. I am wondering if there are just a small group of people going around dropping 5-stars on everything without actually reading what they are rating. Or if I just attracted some counter-intuitive psycho-fan.
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    Serial 5-starer

    Is everyone here very stoned? The whole point of this is that I feel the work isn't worth 5 stars, and yet is being given them on everything. Even the fic with one chapter that has a good thousand words in total. Has two 5 star ratings. There isn't even enough to review! Why are people just...
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    Serial 5-starer

    Is anyone else having trouble with someone coming along and whacking 5 stars on every one of your fictions, regardless of it's state of quality or completion? I've got things of sudden inspiration, single-chapter fics and shitpost brain-farts, all getting a totally undeserved 5 stars. It's...
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    How to become a popular author?

    Step 1: Write a fic Step 2: Become popular
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    Do you care about story ratings

    As an author, I want to but I feel they are so perfunctory at times. I've got this one chapter fic that I got inspired to start when reading an awesome wuxia novel. Nothing to it, just five pages of characters meeting and starting the journey. I just wanted to get it started because bubbling...
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    How to write yuri

    Why should Yuri be written any differently from anything else? Lesbians are still people. They need no special treatment or scorn.
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    Why grammarly hate "really" so much?

    Grammarly has some weird shit going on. I think it's got like, strict, explict Oxford like crap that just doesn't read properly.
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Admittedly, yea. The Synopsis was very wordy. I trimmed it considerably. But glad to know you are still reading~
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    So can I, but I would like your thoughts anyway. Beasts under your bed
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    Feedback feeds me

    Hey guy. Originally I wasn't going to say anything, but I was encouraged by friends to do so. I get that you want feedback. You might have noticed my own drought on that front. But, giving a short five word review and then immediately jumping to try and get a review for your own series is rude...
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    Stories with reversed morality concerning gender roles

    If you are looking for anything like this, "Immortal Swordsman In A Reverse World" hits the beats
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    Looking for Things to Review

    I am always looking for some good reviews on my book~ You'll probably have to read more than the first chapter though, since Chapter 1 is more like a prologue. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/354885/beasts-under-your-bed/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I got nine people who have read to the end, wanna be the tenth? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/354885-beasts-under-your-bed/chapter/354887/
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    Another new author looking for feedback

    Something I have noticed, is names don't translate. "Pete" is "Pete" in every language. So if you say "Pete" is called "Paul" then someone will notice, regardless of what language they are speaking.
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    Another new author looking for feedback

    It was a weird name, so the MC saying a different name it is a very clear context clue to the fact that he fluffed it. You can always have the other woman giving him a stare or some other showcase that he is wrong but she has neither the time nor inclination to correct him. And I am terrible at...
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    How arrogant were you when you first came here

    Never delete stuff you dislike. I've got a few fics that I thoroughly loathe, posted here for other people. Because my opinions are biased.
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    Another new author looking for feedback

    There is a bit of writing clunk I shall file under second language and not mention. You are pretty overzealous with the new lines. For example; “Please do not panic. You are merely dead.”, a female voice tells me. I can’t really see anything. Everything is just a blur. I faintly see a hand...
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    How good is my story

    Paragraphing is certainly...overzealous. For example; I think we all once watched a sport anime and thought fully motivated, "I will start doing this sport!" But most of the time we didn't even start or quit after a few days. I thought this time would be the same. I start but end up...
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    Feedback feeds me

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/354885/beasts-under-your-bed/ Anything from spelling mistakes to overall feel. I know my grammar is sub-par, but Grammarly feels alien and kind of psychotic to me, so I don't use it.
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