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  1. Vanny

    Writing Ahead

    None. But the plots written, in my head.
  2. Vanny

    Give me your opinion

    I was experimenting with a new style months ago. I usually don't write like that so editing it was very difficult. And, in the end, I've rewritten, or taken out chapters, to move forward in a more recognizeable fashion to myself. Compounded onto the fact is, I've written all of it on my phone...
  3. Vanny

    Give me your opinion

    The firdt scene takes place in his mother's car. I explained it by him getting his luggage from the trunk and the tail light fading at the end. Admittedly, I should've just said where the scenes where taking place. I'll go back and adjust it. As for the what. They are journeying to stalking...
  4. Vanny

    Give me your opinion

    On the topic of the vague descriptions early on, none of those places will be revisited. The people were more important to introduce, and where those people were going. I'll go back and add the character descriptions, for the more visual reader, they would've been given later. I'll tone down...
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    Give me your opinion

    Thanks. But could you tell me the chapter that ypu noticed the problem of the setting descroption? I thpight the scenery was done well enoungh. I'll go back and add the character descriptions, for the readers who prefer them.
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    Give me your opinion

    I've written this story on and off for months now, and I'd like know what a reader thinks of it. It hasn't gotten to the fight, as of yet, so you'll mostly be judging the writting and plot. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/33287-word-wise/chapter/90947/
  7. Vanny

    Can I Get A Bit Of Feedback?

    When something like a conversation, explaination happen's long enough that environment becomes forgotten.
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    Can I Get A Bit Of Feedback?

    Dude, I liked it. It's probably the only story I'm interested in on site. And on second thought, after reading it, I'll check other people's work from now on. You are a good writer. You character is beleiveable, and unique. Whatever you've noticed to help you create him, you should lean into...
  9. Vanny

    Whats a novel you genuinely thought was amazing?

    Way of Choices, Snafu, and Coiling Dragon had me waiting like an addict.
  10. Vanny

    Recommendations Two Faced Protagonist.

    Try Phantom: Requiem for the Phantom, and Black Lagoon. They don't fit exactly what your looking for, but you might enjoy them.
  11. Vanny

    Recommendations need stuff to read

    Word Wise. My own series.
  12. Vanny

    get your horny asses in and VOTE

    D, F, and K
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    Recommendations God-chosen/God-sent

    Word Wise.
  14. Vanny

    Arrogance and Cuties outrage.

    Reminds me of the old days of NU debates. Someone quickly, disagree with the man so I can watch.
  15. Vanny

    As an author, what is your take on 'reviews'?

    Personally, it's one of the reasons I don't write much anymore; I might as well keep the stories to myself.
  16. Vanny

    Posting your Novel in Qidian Webnovels. Why and Why Not?

    I caught the whole the drama back then too. You should post where you want. I hear that they have contracts the aren't that good, though, so do some research first. You can also try Wattpad.
  17. Vanny

    Vanny, then. I didn't remember the rules. Again, thanks.

    Vanny, then. I didn't remember the rules. Again, thanks.
  18. Vanny

    Vanny@Ya. To match my Royal Road account. Thanks, in advance.

    Vanny@Ya. To match my Royal Road account. Thanks, in advance.
  19. Vanny

    Tony, is there a way to change my user name?

    Tony, is there a way to change my user name?
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